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| D. Lerious 2003-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseI like how you effectively portrayed Dylan's evolution in this monologue. |
| Lady Parcifal 2003-03-22 ch 1, | abuseIt was so real and very nice. But could you please please please put more commas in it? I would make it much easier to read. It´s not an insult or anything, ok? Just a suggestion. love your writing! |
| MidnightzStorm 2003-03-19 ch 1, | abuseAwesome POV of Dylan. |
| MaryRose 2003-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI did like it. |