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JMaxwell
2008-06-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is a lovely story, and I always recommend it to people. (I'm actually the person your last reviewer was referring to, but I didn't look this story up for that.)

I don't know if you still keep up with Inuyasha, but it just ended. The scanlated last chapter was posted on adinuyasha today. Anyway, out of the far-too-many fanfics I've read, I think you're the one closest to nailing it. Congratulations.
Drake Clawfang
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuseI recently wrote my own story "One Last Time", and a reviewer told me your story was similar. So I tracked ya down. :D And I see what they meant.

A wonderfully written story, quite tragic and beautiful in its despair. Well done.
Yoshida Megumi
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseThis was very good, even if it made me rather sad. It was still beautiful and extremely well written.
Kaluki
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThis is such a peaceful ending to the Inuyasha story. I almost don't want to read any more - fanfiction or manga - and leave this as the ending for everything.

*sniff* I think you made me cry...
wbaker5286
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abusethe beauty of this story is unbelievalbe. the simple dignity at the end of his life was so well portrayed in your words. this was a very moving piece that made me unashamed of my tears.

thank you for posting this
J Luc Pitard
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseGorgeous. Simple and elegant writing. Wonderful details and in character memories. Dreaded the ending, but when it came, it was perfect.
Inudaughter
2007-02-04
ch 1,
abusedamn, now I'm crying hysterically. So cruel to poor little ol' me!
Crystal Twilight
2006-11-06
ch 1,
abuseAww... Cute! Good job, I really liked it! It felt very real to me. ^_^
Michi P.
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abusewow. that was amazing. the end was BEAUTIFUL! i loved the whole thing. Your writing is fantastic.

Thank you!

~michi p.
kitsune-koinu
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abusegreat fic!
elianthos
2006-05-31
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. Again.

'He had lived a sharp, brilliant, brief youkai life, like a burning arrow shot into the sky, still blazing as it tumbled, inevitably drawn by the pull of the earth, its flight exhausted.' I really adore your writing style. This sentence reminded me of Achille's. And of the fate of every being borne from the joining of two different worlds. Opposite converging. the end and the beginning of the cycle. And opposites meeting and merging. รน

thanks for sharing.

elianthos
jax319
2006-05-25
ch 1,
abuseha i didnt let a single tear fall u shall not win
Dsynr
2006-05-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseAs usual, atmospheric.
As usual, nice.
As usual, thanks.

Now will you PLEASE finish "Waters of the Night"?
I've been waiting since 2004 for the ending. I'm getting a little impatient.
A MAJOR Inu Fan
2006-03-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseI Absoulutely Love this fic!It even made me cry which I VERY rarely do!^-^

Good Job!
Save.Mama.Earth
2005-12-06
ch 1, anon.
abusei've probably read your little one-shot too many times, but it is still as good as the first time i read it. it is one of those sorrowfully beautiful things, you know? you painted a truly amazing picture that almost seemed real so i'll keep reading this one.
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