Reviews for Kojiki Trilogy Part III:End of the Worlds

Reviews For: Kojiki Trilogy Part III:End of the Worlds - Reviews: Page 1 of 17

hisokauzumaki 2006-06-14 ch 14,	abuseGreat series but, who's Ayame?
jennamarie 2006-03-07 ch 29,	abuseWow, it's taking me a long time to get through this. I love that I can just keep reading without having to wait for updates, and it just makes me want to scream when I have to leave my computer! (I mean really, who needs sleep?) One question, why wasn't Tsuzuki brought in for Enma's council of war?
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-24 ch 36,	abuseWoot! I finaly know the backstory of Taka and Kyo! :D Yay! Now you have to hurry and continue WDCAK so I don't go crazy with having nothing to read. :P
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-20 ch 22,	abuseI'm guessing they erased Hikki's memory after that? Anyway, no better comment then that. I have a huge headache. @_@. Will read more later.
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-19 ch 20,	abuseYay Hikaru! XD Although... Um... Won't that cause a problem? Unless they just spy on her or something... 'Cause otherwise, she DOES know that they're dead. Oh, I'm babbling. I'll just read the next chapter, it'll explain everything, probably. Although not tonight. Need sleep. Stupid need for sleep.
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-19 ch 19,	abuseYou... are so evil. But I love you anyway. XD
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-17 ch 15,	abuseWow. Ayame's all crazy. Cool. Well, not so cool for Kyo... ^^; But you know what I mean.
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-17 ch 13,	abuseAw... blushing Watari sounds so cute! XD
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-17 ch 12,	abusegiggles at cosplaying Kyo That's sad! And strangely reminds me of a manga my sis bought called Diabolo... But anyway, off to the next chapter. ^_^.
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-17 ch 9,	abusePoor poor Tatsumi...
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-17 ch 8,	abuseLOL! Poor Hisoka! XD Or lucky Hisoka, if you think about it...
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-17 ch 6,	abuseOh, I loved the talk between the girls. So cute and slumber party-ish. XD And they had good intentions... Too bad it backfired... ^^; Poor Kyo...
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-17 ch 5,	abuseDante! XD Wow, I'm a spazz...
AniDragon, aka Riona-chan 2005-02-16 ch 4,	abuseOkay, there's this one little thing that I keep noticing, and that you probably know by now since, like you said, this is a rather old fic, but you seem to be disregarding one huge factor about Terazuma... Like in here, him and Wakaba were dancing, and in the first part of the trilogy, she held his arm at one point... And I'm pretty sure that would trigger a transformation. But other then that, it's all good. ^_^. I'm just a little nit-picky since Terazuma's my favorite character in Yami.
Angel of the Eclipse 2005-02-07 ch 30,	abuseBad Kelly! How dare you spoil me rotten! After reading your works, it’s so hard to find other stories on that I like. Therefore, might I request that you finish WDKAK quickly and start another story? I confess to being an impatient little git, but I only get gittish when it comes to stuff I really like -smiles-. I am going on to read your ‘Muraki Ball’s’ story because I have been informed (by your own authors notes (yes people do read those things (could I put anymore parentheses in here?) that it contains Hisoka angst. And I loves me the Hisoka angst. I haven’t even started it, but since you wrote it, I know I will adore it, so I am preemptively praising it -smiles-. By the way, chapter 2 (I believe it was) of this story was amazing! A little boy Kyo, plus Hisoka being Mr. Super-empathy, equals very awesome (I liked it because Hisoka was actually being useful instead of fainting… its gets a little annoying and repetitive when every author thinks that if they write a story with Hisoka in it, he has to faint at least once for no other reason other then the fact that he is Hisoka.) Sorry I didn’t review then, but I was at home with no Internet over winter break (I had to print out a hard copy of your entire trilogy while I was still at school… that’s right! I have to use that computer fee for something!) So now when people come in my room they ask why I have a huge pile of papers on my bureau. I tell them it’s a Yami no Matsuei story that they should be reading because it’s so good… They respond by looking at me oddly and asking if a ‘Matsuei’ is some type of storm cloud. Have you printed out your trilogy? Even if you make the font tiny, it’s still one gi-normous stack of tree -smiles-! Anyways… How do you come up with this stuff? I remember when I reviewed WDCAK and told you that I would be reading the entire trilogy you warned me that they were early works and to proceed with caution and kindness (or something like that.) Well don’t worry, because although there is a difference with your works now being more refined and all the edges sanded down, your early works are just as jammed packed with creativity, cleverness, foreshadowing, amazing characterization… And you stuck Kyo with a woman! If my memory serves me, this is the only story I have read that puts a YnM character in a straight relationship and still manages to be amazingly entertaining and completely void of Mary Sue-ness. (It doesn’t matter that he’s OC, because you write him so well that I don’t think any one can tell… People will probably write into Matsushita-sensei asking her why see doesn’t write Kyo and Taka into more of the arcs.) ‘Come To Me’ and ‘A Love Story’ were both wonderful as well! And the stories that you posted in your yahoo group that I don’t see on are also really great (though I think some praise also goes to your posse on those, right?) But I’m pretty sure that this trilogy was all you, so this review is solely yours -smiles-. You can go hoard it in the closet and keep it from everyone else (so long as you tell them I liked the stories that were posted in your little shadow fox group -smiles-.) So, to make a long review short: (though I’m sure your fine with the extended version -smiles-) I have nothing but praises for your works. (Angel of the Eclipse hands Kyo a trophy for ‘best character in an OC roll.’) By the way, you gave about a million (okay… maybe about three) different characters that Kyo looks like. Can you give me a list of who they are again? And is there anyone you have for Taka character design inspiration? And in regards to that pile of Kojiki Trilogy in my room, I know Yotsume Toji bookbinding, so I’ll bind it and make an unofficial copy as I wait for you to publish this work so I can get an official copy of it -smiles-… Oh, and that stack will need illustrations and a cover too! Well then, I think that’s the end of the review. I have to whip out some drawing pencils and binding thread… and completely ignore my actual homework in favor of creative pursuits –smiles-. Awaiting more Kelly-creativity in the form of updates to ANY of her stories, and a list of your character design inspiration if possible -smiles-, ~Angel of the Eclipse

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