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| squid109 2005-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseSweet and sad at thesame time. I think you did a good job of creating a scene that should have been in the show. |
| Harlequin 2003-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really love this story, please don't leave it hanging, your writing style is extraordinarly good compairing to some of the Andromeda stuff you can read. Perhaps you could do another chapter about Harper trying to find out in more detail about what happened in Trance's future. And possibly failing misserably, or digging up something mildly disturbing... Anyway, keeping writing! Harlequin |
| desert_rose 2003-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. Keep writing. |
| Claire 2003-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! Write many, many, more like it. |
| Lady Parcifal 2003-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! I hope you go on with it very soon! I like all the H-T stuff, I´d really like them to be togethre , because they are just funny. This fanfic looks really good, interesting from chapter 1 and that´s great! There are so many things that can be revealed about them. I think his memeories would be a bit angsty and stuff, and you can put really funny anecdotes from when he came into the Maru with Beka and Rev. Trance has a lot to say about her future and her race, of course. Remember what he said in ITL? Adoring a purple goddess... maybe an explanation for that? I love this fanfic, please continue with it. For more suggestions, e-mail me if you like! hugs n kisses! |
| gf 2003-03-21 ch 1, | abusegood story, hope you come up with some more. |
| Harlequin 2003-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseScratch away... |
| MidnightzStorm 2003-03-20 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! The writing was beautiful. Please more H/T! |