It must be weird to get another review after so long, but this has to be one of the best thought out fics I've ever read. The unlikely Tasuki/Nakago pairing ended up flowing so easily in this story, and I loved the Suboshi character development.

Every scene is so breath-taking, and this definitely deserved more good reviews back when it was first written. The ending was a bit hard to understand and I had to read it over a few times to figure out if Tasuki actually died or not, but I'm glad it was a happy ending, finally.

...Wow...That's really all there is to say. Great story by the way, though I don't think it needed to be rated 'M'.

oh my god! That was so sad! I've never been a big Tasuki/Kouji yaoi fan, but that ending was so wonderful it made me cry. This story was really really good! Oh, and I loved the parts with Suboshi! Finally, someone sees him how I see him! Yay!

I love it so far! Tasuki...the traitor...Nakago's lover...he he! I know I shouldn't be laughing about that, but it's too tempting. (not something fangirls will usually write about, y'know?) ^-^ But honestly, I love how angsty it is! And you are really good at tying the flashbacks into the plot. It's really well written. *goes to read chapter 2*

I'm surprised this didn't get more reviews..*happy sigh* It was Great! really well written and just the thing i was looking for..Thanks ^^

I hope you continue this soon it seems like it will be a very interesting story. I like it, it is well written.

That was the nicest story about the love of a family and screwed up loyalties I've ever read. I love the way you messed with Tasuki's head! Very talented! Keep writing . . . I'll keep reading!