This confused me horribly ^_^; But once I let it sink in, I found it really pulled at my heart strings. They "technically" said very little, but there was so much emotion here, and all of it was written beautifully. ^_^

(It was confusing, yet beautiful ^_^ Great work!)

~Kaji

This is the best story I've read in AGES. Not just the best fan fic, the best story. Wow!

Talk about bittersweet...geez and you for a second there I thought that thrush was real annoying and that one of them (Tsu) was gonna scare it off or something...
Very sad but good point, does Hisoka know what he wants...having been alone for so long 'so like himself' as you called it, now that he has the chance-other than making sure Tsu doesn't leave-whats he to do with it?
I feel so sorry for Tsu..meanie.

woah!! so sadu.u and very well writen!

wow... what _was_ that? i ... ... hm... you managed to get Hisoka's... detachment, or indecision... as in not having ever thought about it, or lying to himself... across very well... The passive... repetitive sense or whtever it was, the style, worked wonderfully. Like Hisoka was talking to himself and trying to see things in a straight line. The whole scenario was odd, and earnest, and confused in a way, ... I don't know. You have a confusing talent *laughs* Excellently done, I just don't think I'm getting it... the end result... which I guess you kinda leave hanging. Ugh, and now I'm getting sentimental... *laughs*
I don't know. my reviews are so confusing, but it's because there's such a mix of emotions and odd circumstances in this fic that... I guess I'm trying to express them. There was almost a sense of longing from Hisoka, it felt, and i loved the way you protrayed Tzusuki's confession. I think he would get nervous.
It was a good ending line too, and you did this wonderfully... *in awe again*

its sorrowful, but the ending if hopeful. to me anyway. i really like it.

Ouch.

"I let. I let. I let."

The Hisoka here is so determinedly competent, so intrinsically fragile and clinging to his cover.

Ouch.

I'm in the mood today to read something poignant, being that I'm a tad depressed today...

So I decided to see if you have an account, and went through your stories hoping to find something good to read.

And I got a treasure trove's worth of yummy stories ;-D

Ah, I can't help but place myself in Tsuzuki's shoes whenever I read your stories. I guess because I'm pretty much like him in real life...Hisoka's wonderful here, and so is Tsuzuki. The way that this story is weaved is so amazing and deep. It shows the complexities of one of our (if not our 1st) favorite YNM couple, as well as the complexities of being a human being.

Wow. You said so much with so little...! The feeling of unreality and disjointedness one can experience under emotional lockdown was perfectly captured here, especially for those who have ever experienced it. Wonderful, wonderful job. I'm glad I cam across it. Thank you.

I have no idea WHY I like this fic! It's just so-GOOD! Gah. Ignore my vagueness..But damn good fic!

This story is amazing! It seems like some kind of strange poem... I don't know why it feels like that, but it does. This was very well written with so much emotion. Good job!

This story here, this is amazing. Really. Every little detail all melts together and flows and...Argh. I sound stupid, I know. This is an amazing piece, though. You should really be proud.

This had been very well written. You used a method I rarely see in other fics. Great work!

But somehow... I can't explain it... Hisoka seemed evil to me here. I felt like something was off with both of them.

O_o ? O_o

This is truly breathtaking. I think you've got Hisoka down very well, and the situation is entirely believable. I enjoyed it all. It's so... poignant. Yes, I believe that's the word I'm thinking of. ^_^ I hope you write more Yami fics someday.

That was both teribly beautiful and painfully angsty all at once. I -loved- it. What a perfect way to make simplicity say so much... I'm -so- glad I found this. ^_^