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Koragirl
2008-08-10 . chapter 5
good good i like it a lot ! please finish your story
Baku babe
2007-04-04 . chapter 5
Please continue to update and I have a site for you if you really want: http//
Dancers and Pharaohs
2007-01-12 . chapter 5
Please Update soon I love this story
mrs.Sora-sparrow
2006-08-18 . chapter 5
i love the story , update soon
OceanOfMemories19
2006-08-07 . chapter 5
Nice chapter! No, I don't knoe either, you could try
great website.

Selene
Lady Teela'Na
2006-08-04 . chapter 4
Hey Bonnie--one thing I forgot to mention. I am not sure if you know this or not--Yami's true name is "Atem" or "Atemu". Either spelling works, though I think "Atem" is more the traditional Egyptian spelling. It was revealed in the final arc of the series. Just thought I'd tell ya in case you didn't know. ;)
Lady Teela'Na
2006-08-04 . chapter 5
Wow. This is amazing! :D First off, glad to see this story updated. Secondly, I love how you've written this, weaving the gods into the story and making them a part of the actual plot. Your knowledge of Ancient Egypt mythology is astounding. And of course tying the movie into this as well.

Hmm...I don't know of a site with transcripts for the show on it. Sorry. :( Regardless Canon or not, I am truly enjoying this ficcy. Plz, continue. :)
Elizabeth Feliciano
2006-06-11 . chapter 3
I love your story so much. Its a similar fanfiction that I made but with different details and it takes place in Egypt.But it based on the came point. That Tea(real named Anzu) is a the princess of Atlantis and that Yami is an Egyptian prince. Their both chilhood friends.Yami is 12 years old and tea is 10 years. old But they get separated after the death of Yami's father. After 10 years Anzu comes and visit because her father and Yami's father are talking about the incoming war with the north kingdom. Anzu has mature a lot she has well envowed breasts and has astonishing curves. Yami also has mature he has muscles.Anzu gets of the carriage so does her beautiful older named Heala. Heala is very mean to Anzu ever since she was born. Heala is jeaulios of Anzu's beauty and kindness nature. Heala is the same age as Yami but 3 month younger. When Anzu get off the carriage she wants to meet her beloved friend so much so she ask one of the guards where Yami. The guard tells her that Yami is in outside the balcony. She quickly goes to meet her friend. She has no idea how Yami personallity has change. She spottes him outside the balcony. She thinks he looks so handsome. She blushes a bit. She goes to him and greets him. But Yami doesn't seen to reconised her. This feels sad for Anzu. She tells her its his friend Anzu. He suddenly reconised the girl in front of him. Anzu smiles that he finally reconised her. Yami thinks she kind of cute.He also thinks she really mature looking at her curves and how she looks in the gold and white dress. Anzu loks at him too they both blush. Anzu smiles again and tells him "How HAVE BEEN"."fine I guess"with a sadness in his voice. She knows he thinking of his father.Anzu cheers him up by telling him"Yugi"(that the named Anzu always call him). He seen a bit more happy. Later they fall in love. They get test in how strong their love is. THey get married and have a son named Yugi and two daugther named Lilia and Rin. I hope you like my story. I also hope you get another chapter going in your fanfiction. GOOD LUCK! best wishes bye.
Jess Ishtar
2006-06-05 . chapter 3
UPDATE SOON!
RoseSayukino
2005-12-29 . chapter 3
Please write another chapter! it's getting realy good!
Bowzer
2005-10-03 . chapter 3
great story but in this chapter you mentioned isis and if she is the person im thinkin she is then its spelled "ishizu"
Yami'sChick
2005-06-04 . chapter 3
Your story is so cool! please update it, cuz I'm anxious to read chapter 4.
Lady Teela'Na
2005-03-15 . chapter 1
Please...you have to update this!
*makes puppy face* Granted a lot has happened in the actual Yu-Gi-Oh story line since u started this, but please if that is what is keeping you from updating this fic, don't let it! Your story is superb! One of the best YGO romance stories, or story for that matter, that I have ever read. I would love to see this story updated, and I am sure others would too. If you don't want to update I understand, you probably have good reason for not, but please consider updating! ^_^
Egyptian Rose
2004-11-23 . chapter 3
Sigh, I am too lazy to log in right now. I just want to say how much I love this story. I hope you do continue it. Please continue it!
mobileholmes
2004-10-23 . chapter 3
aw this is SO SWEET! i hope there's a ch. 4! i wanna see what's next!
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