 Rebel.Dream.Tatooine.Ghost 2009-09-17 . chapter 43wow. loved snape in a pink tu-tu. can not wait to see where this story goes. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-09-04 . chapter 35 And I'm back and reading! |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-30 . chapter 25 Man, Harry seems to be quite the sleepy-boy, huh? He literally falls asleep. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-30 . chapter 21 Y'know, I really want to read a fan fiction that is not finished, but is being updated while im reading it, so i can interact and give advice to the author so it might affect the story. But two stories i've read and arent finsihd havent been updated for years, which really disappoints me. Sigh.
Well, I'll just say ihopee that harry calls sev dad. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-30 . chapter 20 OMG!
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That was incredibly dramatic and OMG! |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-30 . chapter 19 That was positively ADORABLE!
So sweet!! |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-30 . chapter 18 I can't wait for Sirius to get into the story; he's one ofmy favorite characters in the original Harry Potter series, but considering fan fictions, some of them make me consdier Sev as one of my fav characters. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-30 . chapter 16 I KNOW IT IS QUIRREL!!
Probably Polyjuice potion.. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-30 . chapter 14 To heighten the plot; it would be interesting if you made Sirius and Severus meet, and then there there would be chaos cuz Sirius wants custody.
I looked at a few chapter titles, and one includes Sirius. Well I guess I'll see then if what Im thinking actually comes up... |
 CREATIVEGIRL 2009-08-30 . chapter 10 I LOVE THIS FAN FIC, AS I BELIEVE I HAVE SAID BEFORE. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-29 . chapter 8 This is a "page-turner". I could sit here and read this for HOURS straight, but unfortunately, it is late, and my mother feels it is time for me to leave my reading till tomorrow. Sigh. Well, it is rather late.
You're doing BRILLIANTLY! |
 creativeGirl 2009-08-29 . chapter 4 I have a feeling Im going to LOVE this fan fic. Wait, i already do |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-29 . chapter 3 Aw...
I dont wish to bore you with so many "awws", so until something else catches my eye that i see worthy of reviewing, or any sense in reviewing, i will. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-29 . chapter 2 And I'm reading a Harry, Sev father type fan fic which i usually LOVE cuz theey're so sweet.
But i find this better well written than this other one i was just reading.
It seems to be pretty good so far.
I mean, having sev and harry with that relationship, even though, it is cute and whatnot, can only carry a story so far, you have to write it well to make it a good fan fic too. |
 CreativeGirl 2009-08-29 . chapter 1 It's sort of confusing, switching from different points of view. |