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animechick04 2005-08-11 . chapter 2
update ! update ! plz!
ShiroAndFubuki 2004-12-05 . chapter 2
I love season crossovers!

And the Digidestined of Ages is...

I don't know. ^_^

Keep writing!
happy yaoi lover2 2004-11-29 . chapter 2
...its been over a year since this wonderfull fic had an update...so,update like,REALY soon please?
RikaTabithaStarr 2004-08-30 . chapter 1
the thing with the digidestined of ages is really confusing me, but i'll keep on reading anyways.
it's getting interesting..
Kylin83 2004-06-03 . chapter 2
Great two chapters! Awesome fic - a great idea well-written. And can I guess that each time he spirit evolves he becomes more like a digimon? *sits and waits for more*
FizzyTopKyle 2003-11-09 . chapter 2
@__@ Where...is..the rest?!
AnSushi 2003-09-01 . chapter 2
YAYZ! THIS IS A GOOD STORY! KEEP WRITING...!!^__^
Malathyne 2003-03-31 . chapter 2
I bet the Digidestined of Ages is probably Koji, Kouichi, or Ryo. I bet that Takuya is just feeling the influence of Baihumon. ^_^ YAY! More please!
Peter Kim 2003-03-24 . chapter 2
I think the Tamers,Digidestineds and the Scanners and used each of the Four Guardians powers differently. I think each of the four temples should have a guardian digimons of the digimons that the Tamers,Scanners and Digidestineds have faced,feared,etc. For Baihumon or Ebonwumon's temple,the guardian should be Megidramon since this is Guilmon's anger manifested by Takaoto's anger or Impmon's guilt of what happeneds to Jeri's Leomon. In Baihumon's temple,Jeri's Leomon should be the guardian since Impmon have to face the guilt,etc of what happened. For Azulongmon's temple,it should be Metal Etemon or Piemon. For Zhuqiaomon's temole guardian should be one of the Scanner's foe(I haven't watched the Scanner yet).
Please write chapter 3 of this fic very quickly!
Simple Siretta 2003-03-24 . chapter 2
Cool.
You did very well on this.
Keep it up!!
Alex Warlorn 2003-03-23 . chapter 2
"THE MEANEST, GROUCHIEST, GRUMPIEST DIGIMON LORD HAS MY LITTLE SISTER!"

Seems more like something one of the younger kids would say. For Lee try,
egotisical, arrogant, ruthless, and cruel.

Did Azulongmon even have a bad side?
Better question, does Zuchowmon(sp) even have a good side? Then again, he is the patron diety of all virus types.

But aren't the clouds with gears in the phinox mega's sector?

highest layer of clouds and we'll find it."

For all they know it might be at the lowest level.

cumulus clouds!
?

I just imagine what'll happen when Yolei (a close friend of Sora from her time) tells Tai who Sora ends up with. (evil laugh) Ha ha hah! It will utterly destroy him!

I NEED to know what your secret is. How did you write this new chapter so fast?


  "Or at least given us some bug spray,"
Tentomon: Hey!

sighed Matt as he pulled his shirt off over his head,
I trust he has an under shirt?

Where are Ai and Mako for the one time Impmon's life when he NEEDS them?


  "I will not be responsible for another Digimon's death!"
The major thing that seperates the tamers from the destine. The Tamers understand the need to kill in war. The destine can't.

Zhuqiaomon's Area is just like him. Cruel, unforgiving, and allows only the strongest to live. I can see why most of the lone wolves ended up in his area. It's a wonder Matt didn't.

But I think you forgot one thing, like Matt noting how his little brother would have done what he ordered him to do no matter what. And this order TK has a will of his own. And weather that was a good or bad thing. With an even playing field, the brother might end up in a fist fight, I'm not kidding!

The only reason Suzie is there because Lopmon used to be one of Zhuqiaomon's Davas! It not fair! :-( Just being dramatic.

I wonder how Davis is going to act without TK to get in the way of Kari. (Hey, he's a kid of oppertonity(sp) don't forget.)

You think Kari would be a destine of peace.

whispered Rika as she went over to help the struggling Wormmon on the ground. 
I wonder if Rika realizes how much of a reflection Ken is of her and she has no right to be up and up with him when she was worse than he was at first.

real friends
real friend?
Someone is your friend or they aren't.

Davis... was actually a lot like Takuya. 
If you ask me Davis has more flare, and unlike the other goggle boys, his digimon other never went nuts.

I doubt it's COMPLETELY water, after all, he's not a water breather. (uh, that didn't turn out right.)

The K-boys are taking THEIR seperation well. Figured they were two of a kind.

 

  "It took me I-don't-know-how-may-weeks to find out the truth when I went to the Digital World,"
The others would be wondering what he meant by that.

" asked Gomamon with a slight smile.
AND his evolved form, though Gomamon doesn't know that. Or at least I THINK he is.

Guardromon quickly put it out by stomping all over it.
And made a mark on the rictor scale no doubt. :-)

That's one seriously nasty Digimon!"
Actually, all the ones encountered in the cannon have been good ones.

I'll take care of this little bother."
  "No!  You can't!" yelled Matt as he continued to hack away at the grasses.
Do not make sense.

Even the most wild digimon would cower before a God mega.

digital code of the Veedramon began to circle around its shell.
That means they're in Takuya's home reality.
Each digimon dies differently depending in which sector it was born in.

Heh heh heh. Is Takuya stuck in his rookie form again? That would be PRICELESS AND make him cough up the stupid secret idenity thing.
YouKnowWho 2003-03-23 . chapter 2
Keep on writing.
Alex Warlorn 2003-03-22 . chapter 1
How can this take place in the distant past with the destine of all four god-megas in the same place?

You made a mistake with Takato, you should not have refered to him by name until he gave it. The same with the term, Tamer.

crazy or just flat-out psycho!
There's a difference?

it!" gasp Takato
it!" Gasp Takato

forcing the fireball to slide back down his throat--not a pleasant experience.
Figured it would go through his nose! Heh.

So this is in the tamer world just after they exit the southern digital world with the Ark? Is that the true Jeri or D-Reaper Agent Zero One?

The 'pick up' system screwed up the Tamers. It should have been more picky. Like picking up Jeri when her partner was still alive. And Impmon after he made amends with Ai and Mako. (And let's not forget everyone's favorite gothetic pair Alice and Dobermon)

"-Ken 'The Rocket'
"-Kenji 'The Rocket'

"Digimon High Lords?"
The four god megas.

Monodramon looked up at him, his face creased with concern but when he reached up and touched Ryo he didn't get a response.
Monodramon knows, after all, he has Mullienumon's data in him. (And considering that Kenji's dark spore is a data bit from Mullienumon, it should prove very interesting to see if anything happens.)

T.K. with Patamon
He got his name right!

Rika and Renamon,
I'm surprised Rika didn't laugh out load at being called Takato's friend.

"Takuya!" snapped Zoe as she motioned for him to remain silent about their status. People didn't always seem to take-in the fact that they were Legendary Warriors very well.

HELLO! They're surrounded by other agents of the god megas! This is NOT the time to keep secrets!

"Don't tell me that's who I think it is," groaned Kazu as his shoulders slumped.
Why the dejected reaction?

one of the Great Digimon Sovereign
one of the Great Digimon Sovereigns

You may call us whatever you wish."
You left out the all humble title God Mega . . .

stick in the mud
Where DID that expression come from?

powered by golden light.
powered by white light.

and Legendary Warrior is empowered
NOW is Zoe going to drop the secret idenity gig?

He told us of a Digidestined known as the 'Digidestined of Ages'. He is said to be the most powerful and true of all Digidestined and, of course, we were all excited about that news. A Digidestined stronger than any other isn't just an everyday occurance.

Digi destine didn't exist at all back when the four megas were young.

For lack of confusion, Tai and his group should be Digi-destine, and Davis's group Digimon Adventurers. Also, I'm surprised at Davis' lack of reaction at seeing his mentor at his age.

(only once)
(and only once) before you reach the temple

power over the Digidestined of Ages?!"
I thought the Tamers were alinged to Zhuqiaomon, why would he care of Kenji is being a fool?

Why in the heck did they decide to pick up Kenji when he was still a slave to the dark spore!?

. "I am afraid we can talk about it no longer,
What's the rush?

It's funny, it's LOGICAL for the phinoix and dragon to be polar opposites, but on the digi map they aren't opposed, ( phinoix south, dragon east,) still, your story, your say.

I'm surprised Takato's power source is peace, with a digimon like Magiramon inside Guilmon I was sure it would be red, or is it because he's conqured his dark side?

You should give more detail on the DigiDestine of Ages, not in author notes, but near the end of the story, it's not nice to leave the reader confused.

There ARE some missing players here (Ai, Mako, Alice, Dobermon) all from the Tamer's word. That just seems unfair. I'm totally serious!

I've seen this ambition before, it'll either fly or crash, only you can decide which.

On a light note, I'm surprised Rika didn't have a heart attack from being surrounded on all four sides by goggle heads.
Simple Siretta 2003-03-21 . chapter 1
Cool.
I haven't seen Season 4 yet but this is totally cool.
Update real soon.
HotShot14 2003-03-20 . chapter 1
KEEP ON WRITING!
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