Love the vivid image of Kaylee emerging from the ship.

All things heal. LOVE3

I like the "all things heal". It is the way it is...you're right. Time is irrelevant.
Elen

Ok... wondering why the hell I didn't review this one after I read it the first time.

I loved this. Poetic and from the view of an outsider. I loved the descriptions and overall feeling, and it was a nice little show of heat-driven out-of-characterness when Kaylee chases Mal out of the engine room.

This was good: In just a few minutes time the ship lifts off, leaving behind a scorched imprint on the earth. Time and wind will see to its removal. All things heal. It is the way it is.

I really liked this story. It's not your standard fair, but I thought it was very poetic. I like how it wasn't confined to one specific character's observations, but rather an outsider's view of the crew. Excellent. You really used language well in this little slice of Serenity life.

S