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| B Oots 2004-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a very good story. Please update soon, so I can read, what happens to Gen X and Yvette. |
| Mike N 2003-03-20 ch 1, | abuseHye, this is a pretty good story. I think that you can elaborate on it to bring the audience in though and let us get into Emplate's mind. You have him as quite a complex character. Glad to see it. |
| Hypnos 2003-03-20 ch 1, | abuseVery good story!! Interesting twist on the relationship between Penance and Emplate. I like it. I hope to read more soon! |