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B Oots
2004-12-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a very good story. Please update soon, so I can read, what happens to Gen X and Yvette.
Mike N
2003-03-20
ch 1,
abuseHye, this is a pretty good story. I think that you can elaborate on it to bring the audience in though and let us get into Emplate's mind. You have him as quite a complex character. Glad to see it.
Hypnos
2003-03-20
ch 1,
abuseVery good story!! Interesting twist on the relationship between Penance and Emplate. I like it. I hope to read more soon!
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