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| B Oots 2004-12-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a very good story. I hope to read, more of your stories in the future. |
| Mike N 2003-03-26 ch 1, | abuseRich, this was a good story. I think that it was pretty emotional with everyone bursting into tears quite often. Monet's gift was something though...a piece of coal. I thought it was a bit harsh for the girl considering some of the stuff she's gone through. Overall, nice story. |
| Wishful Thinking2 2003-03-21 ch 1, | abusewell! uh. that was nice, and i dont mean to laugh at your muse, but i think it would have had much more impact if it was closer to christmas instead of closer to easter. nice job, anyway! |
| Cris-X 2003-03-21 ch 1, | abuseReally cute story! Wondering what Penance got, though! |
| Link2 2003-03-20 ch 1, | abuseinteresting story...lil' off season, but good nonetheless |