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| B Oots 2005-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed the story. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. |
| Tokyo Fox 2003-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseOk this is going to hurt. First the cast stiff and almost no personality whatsoever and the plotline is hard to follow and the part about Acme agents fighting each other for honor is dumb. You also didn't write needed parts. The good news is that I think that the basic story Idea is good enough that if you were to work at it, you might make this a nice fanfic. 1/2 stars for this one as it is. |