I would just like to say that I like your story so far and I am hoping that you will send me updates as to when you get a new chapter in, thanks in advance and please e-mail me to tell me that you got this at I really like the story, thanks!

Im so sorry my author alert thing doesn't work... you WILL write more onto this wierd story won't you... plz...NOW *SMILES* don't mind me i just must know what happens i need to know soon or ill...ill... lets not go into what i'd do

Kura out*jumps into a hole*

Typical. A touching moment between Kyle and Aya gets interrupted by trouble. I REALLY wonder what side Damian is on... Keep writing! (Btw, sorry I didn´t review last chapter but I have been pretty busy lately.)

(glares daggers at lily Black) YOU EVER CALL ME A CLONE AGAIN I'M NEVER...EVER REVIEWING YOUR STORY AGAIN, YOU HEAR ME!>_<

P.S. Didn't Damian betray everyone in the last chapter or his he still playing with everyone?
yes, the three of us are guys and yes we are very well build (smilling very evilly^_^)

(sigh)-_- (surrender) Your chapter maybe great but you certainly aren't in your replies...

Great job with Aya's chapter, keep it up! Yes, you are good at writing this one and yes that was mean. Why are calling me Co-Chan and why haven't drop the sugar and you really need to write those weird words in better language.

Commando115 was right, your too high on sugar and (like you said) crazy about it.Three words(if you don't go easy on it): no more reviews muahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha^_^

Yes, you are naughty...FOR MAKING US WAIT SO MUCH! WE WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WITH EVE!

P.S. Five words: NO MORE SUGAR FOR YOU!^_^ I'm mean HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

(Breathe deeply)

I hate traitors, he look like a good friend for Eve(sniff-_-)...O_O or...is he playing mole games just like Kyle...?

A Kyle-fanclub? That would be a good idea. I like that.

Seems like Eve is big danger now. Speaking of her, wasn´t one of her friends´s names "Melissa"? Ironic... I wonder what Damien will do next, and what will happen to Eve? Not to mention Aya and Kyle... Keep writing!

A CLONE??!!O_O I think NOT! Think more like a alternate universe where Aya and Eve have a brother whose a super meta-human stage 3 or "superhuman" with a power level of 650 0 0 TSTH (Times Stronger Than a Human)(wild imagination huh?^_^)So...Damian was spying on Kyle for a while or was he his friend??O_-

P.S.I'M NOT A DRUG DEALER DAMMIT!Just follow what the three of us have been telling you to do!!

0_0 HE BETRAYED HER?...-_- Poor little Eve who's stuck down in that wine cave. Please write the next chap soon.

P.S. for the side effects thingy, follow Max's directions, It's in the movie section of fanfiction and check the Alien/Predator stories and check the reviews for the story: Rupture in the city. You'll understand everything then. Trust me*winks*^_^.

ARGH! A TRAITOR,GODDAMMIT! WHEN I GET MY HANDS ON DAMIAN I'LL SKIN HIM ALIVE!!

P.S. To understand the whole side effects thingy follow Max's instructions and I garantee you'll understand*blinks*^_^

(glares evilly at Armored Core)
You'll have to forgive AC for that(slaps AC in the head) he still has side effects from going beserk in Blackdawn-70631 and Shaloni's story Rupture in the city where Joe tells him that she accepts his servitude (check Aliens vs Predator fanfics in the R section and check the reviews to understand everything) and read the story(if you like this kind of story) to know who is Joe.

Very nice story so far romantic part out already to bad-_- but there is action coming up? Great but please don't make Eve die!

P.S. AC and I are Commando115's best web buddies so from now on, when ever you have a review from one of us the other two aren't far behind to give you two more.^_^

Nice

COMMANDO115 WROTE REVIEWS FOR YOU!? You notty preson. You didn't tell me Lily made such stories, does she look good^_^?

0_0 AHERM!!(back to serious mode) sorry about that, I still have side effects(thanks Max!^_^)
The romantic part of your story is very good but now your putting suspence in it, Great job!