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| yinyangqueen 2003-04-21 ch 1, | abusewoo hoo!THAT was brilliant..i dunno wut it is with u ppl and CRAZY long chapters...but like it oh and another thing...i think this fic should really have a sequel or atleast a SECOND CHAPTER...u guys like fit everything into one chapter its amazing...please continue i duno but sometimes i feel like im the only one reading these anymore...:-( |
| The Ansem Man 2002-03-10 ch 1, | abuseTheMagicalKuja is back again to slap this one on his favorites list! |
| Butterscotch 2001-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that plot line was REALLY good!! Did you think it up? Or did you take parts of it from something else?! Dammet though! You should have made the kiss between Bo and Shirly more romantic!!! *stamps foot angrily* I LOOOOOOVEEEEE romantic things! Write a sequel where they're really romantic and in love and stuff! I like how it was all a suprise though! That was way cool! You're a good writer! Although.... *ahem* I DID happen to find a few gramerical errors... *l* No, really really good! WRITE A SEQUEL!!!! |
| Dr. Kuja (Too lazy to sign ... 2001-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseCam't... read... everything.. must... have... oxygen... Erhem, EXCELLENT story! Though I have notta clue about Shirley Holmes, the trick mystery was TOO D*** GOOD!(Excuse me language) Do more incredibly insane kidnapping mysteries, I like those... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA.... Try to um.. write under video games so I's can better associate, okay? No? Sucks for me... |
| MacGyverMagic 2000-12-01 ch 1, | abuseShould I do a sequel? If yes, please mail me. Other feedback is also welcome there. |