 Karri 2003-04-16 . chapter 10Another wonderfully developed and well written story from you! A pleasure to read! :D |
 Cindy 2003-03-30 . chapter 10 This is a great story, a lot of twists and tense moments, I hope there will be a sequel got to know if Frank will be a show. Thanks for the enjoyment. |
 Nicky 2003-03-29 . chapter 10 No, you did not just stop like that!! LOL. Are we going to be seeing a sequel or is the end of the line for Jessica and Donovan? Either way, this was a really great story. I'm glad it had a happy ending. |
 Deana 2003-03-29 . chapter 10YAY! She contacted him! I hope he goes to see her! Write a sequel! ;) |
 J-James 2003-03-29 . chapter 10What? You're gonna leave us like that? OK, yes we know he's going to meet her, but...but...but I wanna see the reunion!! :0
And I was so sure that he was somehow going to find her during that month off. Dang! So now that we're kind of left hanging...might there be a sequel?? Hm? |
 Ardeth Saunders 2003-03-29 . chapter 10 Ah! I can't believe you ended it like that! Did he go or did he not? Hm? I think he went! Sequel? Yes, of course, there must be a sequel. I don't want to be pushy or anything, but...;) |
 Dawn369 2003-03-29 . chapter 10I enjoyed the entire story and glad you left the ending open. Hm, maybe a sequel perhaps. The Epilogue was very nice and in my imagination Donovan is heading over to Jessica as I type this. |
 SerenaFehr 2003-03-29 . chapter 9What a twist! I never suspected David in the least.
Wah.. this story is coming to an end. We need more of Frank and Jess. |
 Cindy 2003-03-29 . chapter 9 That was a great chapter, I am so glad they caught the guys who killed her sister and niece. I am glad Frank saved Jessica that was very touching before she left for the ambulance. Why did she the leave the hospital before Frank got there? |
 Dawn369 2003-03-28 . chapter 9Oh my gosh, what a chapter. So where did Jessica wind up? Where is she? good chapter. |
 J-James 2003-03-28 . chapter 9I love this story and I'm sad to see it end (well almost end anyway...still looking forward to the epilogue) Now I wonder how Frank will spend his one month suspension...so much time to?
BTW, in chapter 8...I loved when he unholstered his Glock!
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 Deana 2003-03-28 . chapter 9OH NO! She's gone! Why'd she leave, Frank deserves happiness! (Especially after all the crap we do to him LOL!) |
 Deana 2003-03-28 . chapter 8Frank sleeps nude! *GASP* *plop* |
 Khalessa 2003-03-28 . chapter 9very sweet! And shes gone and given him the slip again |
 Ardeth Saunders 2003-03-28 . chapter 9This story CANNOT already be almost over! I loved this:
"**, Donovan, I'm not dead...get off me," she sassed not unkindly.
His eyes found the teasing glint in hers. "You didn't complain last night," he whispered, hearing approaching footsteps. |