lol that was cute ^_^

this story was cute you should write a sequel.

i like it it's sweet :]

Hmm, good story, but if it took you 34 minutes just to write that, I would say that your distracted. I can write a whole chapter of 30 words in that time. Your story is good, it truly is, but you need to make them longer, other than that, you got it!

sincerely,
evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML

...haha?

aw! how cute! Please continue! Pretty please!?
~Me~

Hey
its me again. this time I tried to explore something a little diffrent. I decided to read one of your pokemon stories and i thought it was real good. I always loved the thought the ash and misty geting together. so thanks for a great story. Hey can you send me a copy of "to my godson" please
thank you
Jayda

It was nice and all but... try your hand a chapter story. draw it out(just not this fic. that would be freaky)

thats great, but was that all of the story? Or was it just a cliffhanger ending? i cant wait until more is out AWSOME!

AW! That's so cute!

this is so cute! so short yet so...good! i wish i could do it...-_- anyways! grest job!
~Shippo

Huh?

It was kinda weird -_-... But still cute ^-^

Aw so cute!

That was quite... interesting. Yet, don't you think you could have put in anything else on it as in how Misty got in that situation? Where was Brock? Anyway, that was quite good, but the Author's Notes could use a little work. ^_^