I just realized something. If Setsuna is Yami's mother, doesn't it make Ami her daughter-in-law?

Gee, I never knew Tea Gardner HAD fans.

Wow, that was a cool story. I hope the sequel turns out as well. I'm pretty familiar with dueling but I don't really know what Malik has in his deck other then his Ra card. But I would be happy to help you.

WOW! That was great! That last scene with Yami and Yugi was SO touching, I nearly criied. PLEASE hurry and write the next chap. I can help a bit with the Duel scene too, I don't have an e-mail, but my brother's is zachmancarter@hotmail.com. Write me when you have questions or when you've finished the next chap. Kirby say: Bye for now!

Please keep writing This story. I want it to continue please.

Not bad...^_^

The story was great and if you want, I can help you with writing a duel. I can't relate exactly to all malik's cards since, being English, I've only just started to see third series, but I know a lot of sites where I can get the information from.
So that's that, anyway, I hope you have fun writing your story, if you want to e-mail me sue this address:
c.mattey@dial.piex.com
Dankeshun! ^_~

A highly interesting plotline of how yami got his eyes and how yugi ended up with his grandfather. the ending was a very toughing scene between father and son. However you need to fix several grammatical and spelling erors. I look forward to a sequel of how yami will return to ami and if yugi will be reunited with his parents.

are you doing a sequel?

Oh my god that rocked.This was probably one of the best. It was so wonderful. I myself am doing a Yami/Ami pairing fic. Check the fic out if you get the chance!

~Lorynn/QueenMonoke

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Yes...truly...there are few sailor mercury fics lately...

Your history is good, what about a sequel??...Imagine Yami in his son mind??..m...not rare why is Yugi so shy...

*beams* This is a great fanfic on Amy!! You dont see too many Sailor Mercury fics these days.