That was a good storie after all its just it was a little hard to read and also i too would lioke to see a sequel.

Great oneshot, but I really wish I could read a sequel. (I'm assuming that no sequel exists in the stories I have yet to read)

Hmm interesting little story I wonder how Ryouga knew what the phallus did when he encountered it since he obviously still turned into a pig. You say the end but I see a lot of room for a sequel here. How does Nabiki do in the business world, Does Akane fall into the drowned boy spring, Does Ranma re-enter the drowned girl spring, is Kasumi a lesbian/boy in disguise/in possesion of no sex drive? So many questions I wonder if you'll ever answer any of them? Like I said an interesting story though I am a little confused by the Amazon part describing the Amazons actions.

What is the deal with your gender obsession?

I mean, every one of the fics that I've read by you
has been preoccupied with trying to "blur" gender
lines.

There's nothing wrong with that, but your works
always seem "confused," and I have yet to read one
that makes any truly profound or insightful
comments on the issue.

I don't know if you realize this or not, but your writing style in general is quite confusing.

This isn't as bad as Ranma and Kaneda, but in general it's somewhat hard to follow this and get what you're really saying. I think the problem must be that you skip things obvious in your mind (because you know what will happen), but NOT in the reader's. I think maybe you should find a prereader to help you with this.

-Joshua