Brava brava bravissima! (Sorry just got done listening to POTO). Very good story, made me laugh. I couldn't help but wonder what exactly Merlin was doing while they were making love. Sounds like he's been there a long time, I'm sure he gets lonely too. :D Anyway, this was very good, and, usually I prefer longer stories to oneshots, but in this case, I think it helped rather than hindered. A lot of the forced-bonding stories are very angsty and sometimes hard to get through. Yours was simple, uncomplicated, and in many ways - better for it. Thank you for sharing this, very enjoyable story.

THAT WAS AWESOME!

Woot! A little smexy action just makes the day!;)

Wow!
This is so cool!
I love it!

PWP are so fun to read...because you know it would /never/ actually happen. ^_^ Altho, that spell does sound like a good way to kill someone if you're dying. Good story!

Wonderful story, but if I were you, I'd edit the top part where you rated it a 'hard R or NC-17' since will delete it if they find out about the NC-17 part. They're not friendly like that, unfortunately. Don't worry, I didn't report you, but if you don't want to get booted, change it before someone else does. Once again, I loved the story!

BRAVO!

I loved this story.

I swear if I could I'd have Hearts in my eyes XD!! I loved it OMFG! IT ROCKED! .*_*.

~Chibi-Chan~

I just love your SSHP fics! They are very well written. Good job! This little fic made me giggle abit, because I was keep wondering if Merlin was spying in on them when they was making love in the forest. I mean really...He must get lonely there if he looks after the forest by himself. *Chukels* Hey maybe a little sequel with Merlin's pov on this?

wow.. yoo are an amazing author i love almost all your fics

I love this interesting fic.Not once did you bore me. It is a very well written Snape and Harry

great

Um...Wow!
That was very Anne Rice. You're not related to her are you? I'm a huge fan. Anyhow, love it.

that was too cute.