This is *beautiful*
I really love your details, your simple but many-layered writing style. I love the part about 'no wolf breath against her neck...' because in one phrase, it captures the protectiveness of her wolf brothers and her determination to love Ashitaka despite it. And I love how you put it- that a curse, of all things, binds them forever.
One of the best I've read so far!

wow, thtat was pretty darn good. very sweet.

Nice story, write another one if you can, I will be looking forward to it.

Spot-on characterization, lovely style, believable. Beautifully done.

Beautifully written. I enjoyed this very much.

That is so sad but beautiful. They were meant to be together, well done.

This is neat. Finally, some thoughtful stuff coming out of here. :) Nice imagery with the frustration rolling off in thick, cloudy waves. I really liked the characterization as well. I can imagine Ashitaka would pray, and that San might run off. I encourage you to write more. ^_^

Soft, settled, quiet, and delicately balanced. Very impressive and extremely well put together. Please continue to write more like this!

This is a great story, San's feelings come through as she poinders her place in society. I loved the part where San knew that she was cursed when she returned the forest spirits head, but she was also in love when she kissed Ashitaka. Keep up the good work.

Shannon Hearn

The only problem I can see is you spelt her name wrong. Its Saun not San. But besides that very nice.

Kawaii. Sweet and awesome, in my opinion. YOu did a swell job on the fic. It had just the proper amount of description woven into the plot. Great job.

That was so amazing! It's written really well, and I hope you write some more chappys on this fic. Oro.-^^-