Hey i know this is late but i have to say that i really love this story. I've found it very difficult to find any decent DBZ Fics including the Supreme Kai as a main character and i thank you for sharing such an awesome fic. I'm not sure if you're still active on this site but if you are i hope to be reading more of this story :)

this is a very interesting story

I love how you write :D

This is such an awesome fanfiction. One of my favorites. Please is there more? You're such a talented writer. Go Kaioshin and friends.

LUV IT:)

Wow-this has to be the best story I've ever read concerning the Supreme Kai and Kibito. You portrayed everyone wonderfully, and their personalities were nicely shown. Darela was a lot better than the normal 'evil being from the past comes back to haunt Shin' enemy, and your descriptions were clear and vibrant; very much a Suck You In story from the first chapter. A lot of fun to read, and very intense in parts. The 'battle' between Goku and Vegeta helped to smooth out the left over worry, as well-one of my favorite parts. _ I hope to see more of your work someday soon.

Ah, Calathea..

Neko-chan mentioned you in her diary some time back. It took me ages to get to read your story (riots with the brotherling _) so finally I decided to print it out to be able to read it. ;

Wow.. amazing.. you really have a talent for writing. _! Really love the way you describe the gloomy atmosphere and the fights, how you keep everybody in character, the well worked-out plot.. - the story just plays in my mind. You are brilliant. -v!

Hope to see more from your hand soon... [hint? D!]

greetings from Tyifa

This is an awesome fic! And best of all, it had Kaioshin in it! You might ssy I'm...uh...slightly Kaioshin obsessed.

I loved it! Great job!

"Even he could sense the powerful bond that Kaioshin and Kibito shared, although it’s exact nature and depth were still a mystery to him. He wasn’t entirely sure that he ever would understand it either, that a mortal such as he could even begin to perceive the depth of a friendship that had spanned millions of years."

Amen to that, sister! And there was a lot of action, description, etc. in this chap, and the scene where Kibito was trying to heal 'Shin made me cry. *sniff*

(Yeah, I'm a Kibi/Shin freak, forgive me...)

GOO YOU!

I like your description of the planet and the castle here. You must have put some serious thought into this fic. Again, bravo for portraying everyone, especially 'Bito, as they are.

Ohohoho!

This is really awesome! I like the "Darela" pun, I like the fact you portrayed Kibito-san as he really is, and not as (quoting Darela) "the loyal attack dog". (PS Darela makes for a really evil/interesting Madooshi...I like the magic knife thing!)

Also liked to how you cut to scenes of the Z senshi, emphasizing that DB/Z is a universe, interconnected.

Wow. Creepy first chapter, it gets you going. I'm thinking the creature may be Babidi, but I'm not sure...

Very good start, it sucks you in.

Well, of course I've already spoken with you about the story, but I still love it. . I'm surprised to see you put the whole thing up already, though. O.O! Shocked me.

Nonetheless, beautiful description, and in this chapter, I love how the Z-senshi interact with poor Videl there. _! Hopefully, though, she will grow accustomed to their habits, one day. D!

wow, awesome story, please give us more