i like the whole story but, you should contiue wehat happened after jar jar found out the priest was on valei's side

This is one of the finest works of Jar Jar fanfics I have ever read before. Usually, I'm a sucker for angst stories and this one and the other are the very best. Quite sad though that you're no longer working on this; it would have been fun to see how he would be able to get himself and his friends out of this mess. But it's your decision on whether you want to continue or stop. I quite enjoyed it, despite the cliffhanger. Good job.

Hey! I hope you get this done also! Please hurry!

Aw, wonderfully done, and well written. I've always liked Jar Jar. It's so nice to see fics where the character is handled so beautifully.

Again, a totally absorbing story! Excellently told.

The cliffhanger at the end gave me quite a chill (esp. the blood). But the rest of the text is much lighter than usual, as you promised on the MB. (I can't bare to think what F'jol is going to do with it... But whatever it is, I'm sure it's not going to make me smile. I hope Lito and Toby will help him sort F'jol out good in the end. (Yeah! A powerful showdown of black vs. white gungan magic _))

The fairy is something entirely new. To be honest it came through as quite unexpected for me... But I can already see that's an important part of the plot. (The necklace... Protection... Saba... Kroan... Hint! Hint!) :)

Oh and the part of Lito and the Kaadu... That's so sweet. You've brought across a powerful, (and undoubtably personal) message across with that scene. _

Keep writing!

Wonderful story! Nice to read the work of someone who can take the Gungans seriously. I eagerly await Chapter 6.

Ohmygosh, ohmygosh, ohmygosh! What's going to happen to JJB? Good story! Keep it coming! Oh, my poor Jar Jar... *worry worry* :)

hey i liked it can't wait till part six

great story and great writer except now im really excited to find out what the rest of the story is to the cliffhanger!

oh well...

i hope you get done with the next story very soon!

Tell me when it is available to read.

Please tell me there is more of this on the way soon! These are among the best SW fics out here. I mean it.

I am really enjoying your series. Its a well-written story, and I love the way you portray Jar Jar. Good job! Write more! Binks rules!

When are you gonna make When Midnight Voices Call 5?

i love your stories and im really wanting to read it.

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thanx for writing the stories

Brilliant work. I really like the romance you show between Jar Jar Sabi and Lito Reba! The last sentence is nothing short of brilliant. Keep it up, Draica!

Great, as always. I can't wait for the rest!

Its Great Saba. I liked it