beautiful.
sad.
enrageing.
lost.
lost.

thankyou.
this is such a well written one shot.
it grieves me.
it touches me deeply and brings out hidden tears.
it cracks my already shattered and repaired heart once again.
reminding me.
reminding me.
my soul.
my dreams.
my passion.
Thankyou.

Well done! I liked how you made Jareth three-dimensional. I could tell, when I watched the movie this was how he felt. And, this is something like the relationship I have with a unmentioned character.

Very touching, and purely Jareth. I love the way you did this. Terrific job! ^_^

Good story.I enjoyed reading it.Ja.

That's kind of sad, i like it, but sad. ::snif...snif:: Poor man, needs a hug and a kiss. Maybe a diamond could be his best friend. I'm joking. Marilyn Monroe song running through my head. I really like this and maybe, just maybe, you caould make this into a pretty interesting story. Not quite as sad though. Very well written, hardly any grammer or spelling problems. Show of maturity that not even I can possess at this point in my life. I envy you...

I wish I could write like that!! It was really beautiful but I think Jareth and Sara should be together.

oh wow. i really cant say more than that. that was soo good. wow a story from the perspective of Jareth, whom i love. David Bowie is so hot. lol great job.

That...was...amazing!

Wow, this was really good..The only question I have is are you going to continue this, or is it a one-shot?

good story! i'm very impressed, and it gives me ideas for my own fic.

That was just wonderful, sad, but wonderful.

Its been a long time since I’ve read something so deep coming from Jareth. And I have to say I love it. The way he denies his love for her yet he was willing just to stand by her side till the day she dies. I can honestly see Jareth doing that, it seems to just fit him so well. It had a perfect ending but I would really love it if you would make this a drown out story. Of course with Sarah and Jareth ending up together. :) you owe Jareth that much. ;) again I have to congratulate you on a wonderful story. Hope to see more like it in the future.

Wow! O_O

That was a *very* good Jareth introspection peice. Its always good to have a good looking inside his royal sexiness's skull. Very nice fic - well done!