This seems preety good so far. I can't wait to read more...CLIFF HANGER!

wow great start to a great story! don't stop there! please check ouit my story 'a new beginning' please

Great, I really like the way you are putting real fealing in the fic. Now,go on writing and dont stop okies?Read you later. bye bye

The story was nice. You should make other chapters about this story.I like this story so much.

I like it. A very good start. Molly seems to e a very interesting Character, and it seems her past it catching up to her. This should be good! I'l be waiting for them next installment.

Signed;

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Death Jester.

Brill!

RAe

OMG
U so have got to UPDATE THIS FIC
LIKE NOW!
I'm serious this fic was so kool and it totally let me in suspense with the ending which was perfect being like a dangerous Mysterious voice that was hiding and looking at Molly from his hiding place
SO kool!
SO UPDATE ALREADY WILL YA
ASAP
OR BETTER YET NOW!
I LIKE SO CANT WAIT!
Thanx
-AngieX

OMG
U so have got to UPDATE THIS FIC
LIKE NOW!
I'm serious this fic was so kool and it totally let me in suspense with the ending which was perfect being like a dangerous Mysterious voice that was hiding and looking at Molly from his hiding place
SO kool!
SO UPDATE ALREADY WILL YA
ASAP
OR BETTER YET NOW!
I LIKE SO CANT WAIT!
Thanx
-AngieX

Exelent! Continue please. I realy love it :)

Hey
Great begining
I think this story has real potential
Update ASAP ok
later

i like it

i like this chapter

Great begining. I love stories like this. PLease continue. I really want to know what Logan is going to learn about her.

Hehe... I know some people named Molly... *stares off into space* Doo doo doo...

Kyro: more!

Vivien: its only the first chapter, but the more chapters, the more reviews

Kyro:so write alot! so we can read it!!

Vivien: ja ne