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| chamer 2008-06-29 ch 103,  | abuseI liked your story so far but what really got me is the letter by Hitomi.I wished that it could of sounded more of a letter stating that she would be back, but I guess you have something eles in mind. |
| Arisuke 2008-02-21 ch 103, | abuseMan, when are you going to finish this? I can't stand waiting for a long time. In the meantime, can you read the stories that I posted and give a review, at least? |
| YamiYugi342 2007-08-29 ch 103, | abuseAh...a long wait, huh? I hope its not like years on end, because that usually takes your inspiration. It looks like its winding down, so I'll be waiting for the next update, whenever that will be. |
| animeXmangaXobsessed 2007-07-26 ch 21, | abuseNO! I can't believe Van would do such a thing! Great story! It was your birthday? Happy Birthday! What's ACEN'O3? |
| animeXmangaXobsessed 2007-07-22 ch 12, | abuseWow! Great story! Um... but the only thing that had me a little confused was that Hitomi would slap Merle infront of Van. Great story! I love it! |
| Lucybye 2007-06-28 ch 103, | abuseIt cannot end like that ! Please update soon! |
| lucybye 2007-06-25 ch 35, anon. | abusenot merle! |
| TheEndlessSnow 2007-06-24 ch 14, | abuseAllen's sisters name is Serena not Celena |
| Lady Yunaleska 2007-05-11 ch 103, | abuseOh wow I wasn't really expecting that!! I also can't believe it's been almost two years since I last read this story. :P But as always, each new chapter was brilliant. I am very impressed that you researched the stories and Archimedes stuff, it definitely made the story much richer! Keep up the good work! I hope your plans for your new website go well, and I look forward to your fanfiction website, it sounds wonderful! I wish you all the best and hope it won't be too terribly long until we see the next chapter. Until then, Lady Yunaleska |
| GaiazHeart 2007-04-27 ch 103, | abusethe letter u had hitomi wrote has crushed my heart. i die to know wht happens next. and i wish you luck in all u'r trying to achieve ^_^ |
| shadowneko003 2007-04-27 ch 103, | abusewell, good luck on your website, poor Vaan though... as long as you finish this story, it doesn't matter how long it takes. =) |
| serenityrain2233 2007-04-21 ch 103, | abusethis was good and i hope you canupdate sooner than expected and i hpe janice is alright too well bye now i love what your doing i hope these two will some how end up together. |
| clavira89 2007-04-20 ch 103, | abuseright. so she basically tells him that she'd rather be a sprinter (aka living without him) than to live a happy life (with him). seriously - either she is very shallow or she... uh, I really don't know why she would leave him without a good reason (and lets face the facts: she didn't have a good reason) well, basically I just want to punch her in her pretty face to make her see reason anyway, update soon |
| jossi-31 2007-04-20 ch 103, | abuseWow, thats so sad...poor van, hitomi cares more about running then him. Shouldent you to your multimedis website for the stories when your done the stories? Then at least we would be able to read them to their completeness... |
| Inda 2007-04-20 ch 103, | abuseOh boy just do your best! I love this story and I hope Hitomi finds what she looking for but she needs to be with him! keep it coming!! |