This was a great fic! For two minutes you got me there, I have to admit! :) A really good story about making difficult a right decisions!

Aw! This was quite lovely as well as WP! I smiled and laughed quite a few times! This was fun, reading about how he got the letters and the anguish of realizing the choice he had to make. I think I almost spit out my drink when he kissed Lily and knocked over the drink. LoL. You showed his excitement very well. And Sirius's? Oh, that was quite amusing. What a best friend.

You really made the realization of how hard it was for him to choose stand out in this. It really shows what kind of person your James is, as well. The idea of him longing to be able to be a professional Quidditch player but more importantly wanting to fight and help people showed a variety of sides of him.

Once again, truely great job!

You've enticed me to check out your other work, as well. And the moment I have time, I certianly plan to.

Again, best of luck and hope to hear from you soon!

=) *more cookies to you*

Ok...I'm a retard...and had gotten a story name totally wrong. You didn't write anything called "About Inconsistencies" but had written another story I was thinking about. Don't know where I got the other name...we'll attribute it to lack of sleep. Sorry if I completely confused you, but it really is you whose writing I like and whose story entitled...now wait, let's see if I get it right..."Winding Path" I really, really would love to see finished. Anyway, I'll stop being annoying now and cross my fingers and toes that you've forgiven me and decided to finish.

I'm too lazy to log in.

Anyway, this was good. Winding Path is good, too. You're an excellent author, need I say more?

Sobering little story, isn't it? I only wished I had time to read "Winding Path" because I really enjoy this more serious tone to your writing.

First let me roll my eyes at anyone who's going to discount your story simply because Sybil was perceptive. Besides - anyone could have noticed his owls that morning. And, goodness knows, Sybil's NOT stupid, just a bit...out in La-La land. And it wouldn't do well for her to be so flighty and have Lily as a friend. Our favorite heroine's not that lax about who she chooses as friends.

About this story - oh, it's so cute. Well, let me rephrase. It's well-written and evokes the necessary emotions that one would expect in a teenage boy who's struggling to become a man and make mature decisions while realizing his goals in life. It makes sense. It makes me happy. I makes me mad that there are so few reviews. You really ought to advertise it more.

Despite whatever, I'm thrilled at this. Interesting, too, that you had James kiss Lily - odd reaction to such news, perhaps, but it makes their future interaction meaningful. You're a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.

I like it but Sybill Trelawny is supposed to be a fraud for the most part. I'm assuming that's who Sybill is, right?

OOh! This was good! It's explains some.