Great story!

Nice, groovin' fic that, despite several glaring grammatical errors, managed to captivate me and keep me entertained for several hours.

-Phun-k P4L

This is fanfiction worth reading and rereading over and over. I just started reading this, and typically I don't offer my opinions to the end unless I'm doing a line-by-line crit, but I felt like I had to point out the fact that the author uses a very unique and refreshing narrative structure, jumping from character to character without it becoming confusing. The results are terrifyingly real. Job well done.

~N

read this in one go very good thankyou

This has been pretty good. Since I can go ahead and make assumptions regarding the outcome, I have decided to assume that Shinji still has the know how and ability to use his AT field and blow stuff up (on the premis that once known, anyone could do it(alternatly, only Rei and he can since they have the genitic makeup) and it is probably just less powerful now.) and hid this fact so that he could get out. And as far as who he chooses, I prefer Rei, but in some cases (like this one) I say he should be with both. Although, with Misato's actions, maybe this will be a case of all three once they are older? Well, whatever. Anyway, this was a good story. Good job.

Great story, man. Just great. The build-up to the plot was well done and when you finally hit the climax you really delivered. The battle scenes were well written and never drawn out and I really appreciate the "Happy Ending". Too often I churn through an EVA story only to find out that everyone dies in the end in some freak accident *cough* True Love Waits *cough*.

Great work and I hope to see a lot more EVA fics outta you.

BD

That was certainly interesting. I've always wondered exactly how Gendo's version of Third Impact would have been different from SELEE's. Though I dobut what you wrote of Gendo's version is what Hideaki Anno had in mind, it *is* entirely plausible.

That you were able to complete this story without pair is short of miraculous. In so many ways could Shinji have been trapped into the proverbial hot seat and yet he escapes (getting shot is indeed a fastidious way of getting out of such occasion o_O) Very enjoyable, and despite the fact that I am three years late on submitting a review, I hope it isn’t an annoyance to you that I do so.

Now onto your other 6 fictions!

All I can say is that this is simply amazing. Your writing flows, you have an EXCELLENT grasp on the characters as well as a show. You kept it filled with humor, action, romance, and just in all kept it entertaining. I loved it. Looking forward to reading your other works to!

In fan fiction, there are the long epics of heroic acts and unconquerable odds. There are fics depicting tragic events, unparralleled drama, and life scarring content. There are fics that simply mess with your your head, fics that make you question your outlook on reality, fics that make make you laugh your head off...

And then...

And then there are fics like these that simply leave with a warm, fuzzy feeling inside, that just make you feel GOOD about life in general, and have an incomprehensibly posative effect on your outlook on life, the universe and everything. This fic made me feel like a million bucks after every chapter. I don't know how you managed it, but this fic was simply wonderful.

Brilliant work!

nice to see that u can complete a work. i do enjoy reading it, even though the only saving grace is your self imposed angst in your announcemnets. finish your other works when you get the chance!

This is one of the better stories I've read lately.

It does lurch back and forth unsettlingly between WAFF/sitcom and angst, but overall it's decent.

And I liked the fact that you're confident enough to use an ACC in a significant role and creative enough to have an ACC that isn't a Mary Sue.

I also liked your characterization of Ritsuko--she's complex, underappreciated, and underused in fanfic; too many people only see the intimidating "mad scientist" side of her and turn her into Ilsa, She-Wolf of the SS, because they don't see that, for all her scientific brilliance, she's also a naive and childlike woman who thinks (or thought) that Gendo loves her as much as she loves him. Your Ritsuko is, like the one in the series, a basically decent and sympathetic person who thinks of the things she's done and wonders if she's beyond redemption. I like the psychological complexity you brought out for her.

I think Gendo is a more complex, more tragic figure than you show here--still a villain, but a sad little man whose motivations are understandable in a twisted sort of way--but what you wrote works.

Anyway, I'm very favorably impressed with what I've seen of your work. I get the impression that you're busy, but I think we'd like to see you write more, when and as your busy schedule permits. Thanks.

Hey, cool. Such a great fic. that forces me to keep reading and disregard all my other responsibilities... I don't get many of those now adays. Anyways, there's not much to say exept that eaverything was fantastic short of the last few chapters. Those downgraded to just good, although I'm unsure how much of that has to do strictly with my tastes . Heh, and I suppose you can't really expect much depth or length from an epilougue but...

Anywhays, I'll go check the rest of your work whenever I know that leaving my obligations for a day or so won't be too destructive.

I'm not particularly happy about how you have Gendo using his own son -again- as a tool. would be fun to throw in a company that will stop gendo's "god" imitation.

Very good story tho, I like it.

Well, I'll just be blunt and say that I loved this fic. Usually, unless it's a Shinji/Mana fic, I prefer a Shinji/Rei fic, but a coupleless one between Shinji, Rei, and Asuka is just great. The competition between the latter two is just so funny. On an off note comment, what's up with Chapter 13 and that AU world? I've seen 4 different stories with literally the exact same beginning, with 4 different authors. Anyways, I hope you decide to do a Shinji/Mana fic, once again, those are my favorite. -Sighs.- I wish GoS would come out in America... Well, good luck on your other works, I've already ready your Shinji/Rei one and it's just as good.