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| wouldntyoulike2know 2003-08-19 ch 7, anon. | abusegreat the way it is just kinda wish ya would've turned him. this reads like a great supernatural mystery thriller and a dark comedy i like bout each of the fics. try writing origonal. |
| Patty Hillard 2003-04-03 ch 7,  | abuseI want to read your Last appocolypse and the other short stories that you took paragraphs from. Email me Bunny_Mommy_N_Saver@hotmail.com |
| Steve 2003-03-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseVery dark but very good. Still wish he would have dusted deadboy... |
| David 2003-03-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseImpressive. Truely impressive! I like how you gave it a positive end without making it an "everything is now perfect" ending! (Still, I would love to see a little something on how they are in a year's time...) :-) |
| Jane Davitt 2003-03-28 ch 7, | abuseI love the ending; hot, sweet and then just that edge of angst as Dawn gets to find out what happened. Wonderful fic; I hope you do more in this series. |
| RobClark 2003-03-28 ch 7, | abuseExcellent ending, glad to see Xander getting his act together. Well done job on a great series. Rob |
| RobClark 2003-03-27 ch 6, | abuseExcellent story so far, very well done. Rob |
| Jane Davitt 2003-03-27 ch 6, | abuseI liked the fact that even Angelus isn't 100% evil, the hint that he might be looking for some kind of escape. Xander being so ruthless comes off as beleivable too; he's been through so much that it's not surprising. Really enjoying this. |
| Bolo 2003-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseMore!! |
| ParadigmShifter 2003-03-24 ch 2, | abuseI liked this. It strikes a note somewhere that works. However, I hope that Dawn and Xander do not have a major falling out. I prefer her to Dru. (As long as she's grown) And Angelus is back in town... how many deaths on his conscience this time? |
| RobClark 2003-03-23 ch 2, | abuseGreat start, glad to see another in this series. Hope you don't break up Xander & Dawn, I like them together. (After she grows up, of course.) Rob |
| Jane Davitt 2003-03-23 ch 2, | abuseI hope you write more in this series at some point: I'm really enjoying it. Xander with the two D's is surprisingly right and the flashbacks in the form of his book are wonderfully, tantalisingly dark. |