 wouldntyoulike2know 2003-08-19 . chapter 7 great the way it is just kinda wish ya would've turned him. this reads like a great supernatural mystery thriller and a dark comedy i like bout each of the fics. try writing origonal. |
 Patty Hillard 2003-04-03 . chapter 7I want to read your Last appocolypse and the other short stories that you took paragraphs from. Email me Bunny_Mommy_N_Saver@hotmail.com |
 Steve 2003-03-28 . chapter 7 Very dark but very good. Still wish he would have dusted deadboy... |
 David 2003-03-28 . chapter 7 Impressive. Truely impressive! I like how you gave it a positive end without making it an "everything is now perfect" ending! (Still, I would love to see a little something on how they are in a year's time...) :-) |
 Jane Davitt 2003-03-28 . chapter 7I love the ending; hot, sweet and then just that edge of angst as Dawn gets to find out what happened. Wonderful fic; I hope you do more in this series. |
 RobClark 2003-03-28 . chapter 7Excellent ending, glad to see Xander getting his act together. Well done job on a great series.
Rob |
 RobClark 2003-03-27 . chapter 6Excellent story so far, very well done.
Rob |
 Jane Davitt 2003-03-27 . chapter 6I liked the fact that even Angelus isn't 100% evil, the hint that he might be looking for some kind of escape. Xander being so ruthless comes off as beleivable too; he's been through so much that it's not surprising. Really enjoying this. |
 Bolo 2003-03-24 . chapter 1 More!! |
 ParadigmShifter 2003-03-24 . chapter 2I liked this. It strikes a note somewhere that works. However, I hope that Dawn and Xander do not have a major falling out. I prefer her to Dru. (As long as she's grown)
And Angelus is back in town... how many deaths on his conscience this time? |
 RobClark 2003-03-23 . chapter 2Great start, glad to see another in this series. Hope you don't break up Xander & Dawn, I like them together. (After she grows up, of course.)
Rob |
 Jane Davitt 2003-03-23 . chapter 2I hope you write more in this series at some point: I'm really enjoying it. Xander with the two D's is surprisingly right and the flashbacks in the form of his book are wonderfully, tantalisingly dark. |