Such a good story. Your Karsh voice is just about perfect. I really liked the not-so-happy ending, actually... I couldn't imagine it happening any other way, the things were going.
Oh, and I thought the "bad" frog joke was kind of awesome.
I always wanted Karsh and Riddel together, oh i would love to see them happy. I really don't like dario and Riddel together. lol
Karsh X Riddel all the way
Spades 7/8/03 . chapter 5
Wow that was really good! I really enjoyed reading that :) I liked everything... im a karsh fan too.
YES! I love this story! (It doesn't help that I'm such a huge Karsh fan _;) This was great. The interaction, Karsh's thoughts... and unfortunately, the end is very true. Karsh can't really be... quite happy. ; It's kind of impossible for him to ever get it going with Riddel in the game or even here in your fic, and he's pretty much loved her for a long time, so it'd be WAY too hard for him to just let her go. So... a miserable ending for him is kind of an in-character ending, unfortunately. _; But I loved it. It worked very well, I think... Very nice! Continuation or not is entirely up to you, to boot. (I'm pretty sure the worlds combined, BTW, and the folks wouldn't remember a single bit of the adventure. Damn you Schala. @_@)
Wow! That's a good fic! *.* The character interactions are good... the thoughts and the pain Karsh is going through, you can almost feel! And the ending! ;_; ::sniff sniff:: Sad! But -good-, I think. I think the ending, as it is, _is_ a good ending. It doesn't neccessarily have to be a happy ending to be a good ending (as much as I _like_ happy endings ;) I just can't see Karsh and Riddel getting together - she and Dario are just *far* too close ; [besides, I like seeing Karsh with someone else, but I won't mention that - it's not important X3] You've written a really good Chrono Cross fic, here. I hope to see more :D
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