wow,really,wow how do people learn to do that, cus wow...:]:}:...mazing !oh can ya feel the oh ...:]:]:] give us more please!

HI AMI!
Nicly written poem! (even tho, your sis wrote it..)
VenussnowAngel/The-Great-Monk-Grl/Rita

That was really ...WOW... that was creative and so unique! I loved it. I was beautifully written and very poetic! The imagery was so vivid. Keep up the good work. - BT

Your sister STILL writes better than you!

Wow, great job, *! I liked it very much! Excellent, excellent, excellent! _