Hey, I liked this story a lot! Did the blue-grey at the end mean Callista (cuz she had that color eyes) and the "fiery red" meant Mara's hair? If so, thats really cool and subtle at the same time. Really cute fic.

Another great one, dear MJS :)

I love how you depicted their friendship at that moment in the official chronology.. She was the right woman to catch him at that time... i'm sure that's how it happened, too :)

Keep up the great job!

Love

Mireille X

Very good.

Oooooo... I love that last line. =]

Great! Fiery red.. yes red is a much better color! mara and luke forever! callista.. what a.. i wont say it lol.

You are such a great writer! :)

Callista? Luke... mental breakdown? AAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH! I guess he's gotta let it out sometime. You get a 7.

very good, Luke would probably do that sort of thing after he lost Callista, and no one every mentions anything in the books.

That was wonderful! I loved it. I cried! I love the ending, fiery red, not blue-gray.

i myself am not a callistia fan... i never understood why luke would be interested in someone like her... but i loved how you made him miss the only person that he thought loved him.. I also liked mara's comment about Lukes family loveing him more..smart move there.Another cool touch in your story was the sky chaingeing to the color of mara's hair.. without a "single speck of blue-grey" yahoo..good bye callistia colors and hello mara colors.. anyway, great story,great wording!