|Reviews for The Long Way Around|
| Midnite 5/31/03 . chapter 1
i've finished reading all your final(ly) stories... ehehe..._;;
it was so god! i like the word you added there: Being happy? or to know which is the right thing?
The sentence made me think a LOT afterwards, because it's a true sentence. it was a very hard choice to make... if it was given to me...
ANYWAY! love you stories, cool work and keep it up!
| firedraygon 5/28/03 . chapter 1
Wai, great fic! _ KakaIru forever! Please write more!
| Rasberry Jam 5/13/03 . chapter 1
This was, to put it simply, a wonderful fic!
I don't know what to say really. Might consider reviewing it later when I have collected my thoughts. But, well, I loved your detailed lectures, the way you described simple everyday things, let the Hokage know (since he has a ball I just saw him knowing, and then you wrote that he did, giving them his blessing. Woo! Rox!) and the whole complexity of a relationship.
Aw! *butterflies in stomach* this was wonderful! I just.. ack.. can't give you any good constructive critisismt at all.
| Lady Hankosha too tired to sign in 5/6/03 . chapter 1
Adorable. Good use of dialogue, and the elements in discussing strengths and weaknesses...you pinned them down quite well. This fic had me smiling, simply because it's good writing; added to that was the complexity couple of Kakashi and Iruka. I would recommend this to other people.
| IansKoibito 4/30/03 . chapter 1
_ I just love this story/ies *cough* Have read them all in order a few times now already and thought that I might leave a review and tell you that I love you. Yes indeed I love you for writing these stories. Me thinks that they were very good and very...ah...Kakashi and Iruka-ish, or IC I 'spose. _ Some of the wording and stuff just really struck me as being really them. Neeawys, I hope that you'll write more KakaIru in the future. Ja
| Renn 4/22/03 . chapter 1
So perfect! the ending summed the arc perfectly, and it was, as always, very-well written!
I hope to see more Kakashi/Iruka fics comming from you
| Ceres8 4/15/03 . chapter 1
I love you.
Seriously, though. You have totally gotten me into KakaIru. Probably wouldn't have if I hadn't read this group of fics. Thanks for writing and please continue to do so! Yay you!
| Gianduja 4/10/03 . chapter 1
i am VERY happy to see this. i didn't even expect a fourth part. it is nice how each of your kakairu fics can be read as separate entities, yet they can be linked together D (hope that makes sense XD). after reading [Dare not Breathe], i had gotta a feel for kakairu. X3 then i went on a massive spree of hunting for pics online at japanese websites. i have you to thank for getting me into kakairu as well as naruto. after watching episodes and going back to read [Dare not Breathe], the fic was given a new light... i enjoyed reading it more. it was as if your words were filler to the series, the dialogue between iruka and kakashi when we couldn't see them ) [The Long Way Around] was great. i was crying at the scene when kakashi had finally taken back his icha icha paradise book. your portrayal of their relationship was wonderful, sweet, seductive, and well... angstily sad. it was appropriate and realistic. if you can, and inspiration strikes, it would be great of you to write more. if not, [The Long Way Around] is most certainly a lovely piece to conclude the other three fics. thank you for the great fic 3
| CowboySpike 3/26/03 . chapter 1
OMFG! n_n I love this little continuation you have going here. 3 Your KakaIru is so sweet and just the perfect amount of angstyness. XD *lovelove* It says chapter 1.. is there gonna be more? o.o *jumps up and down* D -CS
| mugenjou 3/24/03 . chapter 1
fabulous stuff kakashi and iruka are an endearing pairing. wonderful work. the characters were in character, and the story was well-written and very deep. i like the whole water/fire analogy. _