Good lord, Xellos is EVIL! Man...poor poor poor Vrummy...that was so sad! And really, really good!

E, yay! Another great Vrumugun fic! This was very good, Zarla. I really liked it. And I'm sure Xellos did too! Yummy negativity... M... But poor Vrumugun...
Anyway, as always, you should write more! ^_^

Hey, your fic is thrilling to no end. Perfect for tension lovers, (ejem, like me). Well done, I found myself looking for an additional dialogue between those twoe, Xellos and Vrumugun, just to feel the growing tension. Keep going, you are good.

Teehee. Remember me? ^^; Oh GODS, Zarla! Where did this COME from?? This is bloody brilliant, I tell you! It's very mysterious in some ways... *mwee* I swear I'll write my own ZanVru fic someday soon... meanwhile, you've gotta give these guys a happy ending for once! (well, not that you haven't already, but... >.>; I just wanna read another fic of yours. ^^)

Vrummy!! T.T So sad! But for some reason, I seem to like these Xellos torture ficcies. o.o Maybe I'm just weird like that. Oh well. Likes it lots. Yup good!