please update and finish this story i love it so much i want to find out what happens please continue it

love it please continue its really good

How come you people won't update? I mean seriously. I've seen people start stories and stop updating after at least 3 chapters. Your story is very good. I want to know what happens next. Although I'm pretty sure you are just going to ignore this. ¬.¬

I haven't read much of your work. I did, however, take a glance at the first three you had published. You seem to have a problem with past and present tense. Example: "Kagome was thinking about refusing the invitation, after all, they just met, but again, she is on some kind of vacation, isn't she?" I think it would've made more sense if it said, "Kagome was thinking about refusing the invitation-after all, they'd just met- but then again, she was on some kind of vacation, wasn't she?". I'm sorry if I offended you by trying to correct your grammer. I by no means wish to offend you in any way, and if I've made you angry, I'm very, very sorry. I'm only trying to help, but I hope you didn't take it the wrong way. I think that you have definetely improved your writing since the first few fics that I've looked over, and I admire you for that. Please continue to write and improve. I love the plots of your stories, and I hope that you keep writing and being creative. Once again, I hope I didn't irritate you with my attempt at correcting your writing. I felt I should advise you a bit since I see people writing in the wrong tense ALL the time online, and I think you might actually try to listen to me...maybe.

I realy like your story so far. Please update again realy soon even though you havent in almost a year.

i love this sesshoumaru stories! aw please dont' stop..although its nearly been a long time since u updated but please try again!

How long have I been waiting?
Over a month?
You'd better hop to it.
You're not allowed to take such a long break on such a good story.
So move it ok buddy?

keep writing please or i will die

I'd have to admit that it's a pretty good story.

aw -crys dabing eyes like in a good love movie- that was so cute! ireally can't wait to read more! please update

so sweet and nice please update soon

are you going to update this story?

^_^ This story is so cute! Please update soon!

aw.. they're soo adorable.. please keep writing.. i didn't notice the transition at all!!.. luv ya ..*just your soul.. muahahAHAHAHAH*..

eheh.. forget that..
see yaz ^-^

AAHH! HOW KAWAII!!