i loved this story and the depth in the characters! I liked how you describe the way they were feeling. This was amzing I really enjoyed reading it!

love love love your story
so sad it had to come to an end but great ending
gotta love shane and dustin :D
i hope you'll write more tori/blake stories :D

Wow, I didn't review this chapter the first time I read this? I'm a bad person. But that's okay, because I'm reviewing now and (I think) late reviews are better because you've forgotten about the story and aren't expecting them.

Okay, now I should really get into how much I love this story, but more precisely this chapter. It was great. I love that Black is sorry and hurt because he took away some of her innocence. I love how much he hates...Dill? It doesn't matter, because this is so great. You are one of the most amazing writers. Keep up the greatness!

I loved this story and I hope u write more Ninja Storm. Ninja Storm rocks. In my opinion its one of the best PR series out of the ones recently done.

This is fantastic! I love it! :)

wow. amazing! thanx for the great blake/tori moments!

That was so great! The perfect ending to a very prolonged story! It was worth the wait and I sincerely thank you for writing a (good) story centering around this couple, there just aren't enough.

Keep up the good work!

OMG! What a brilliant ending. I loved it! Great end to an amazing story. Conga-rats!

Will we be hearing any more from you soon? I hope so! You are a great writer and I would love to read more of your work!

*sighs happily* Really great lovely ending which made me smile so much! I adore how you finished it, very NS. Thanks for brightening up my day! :- )

wow, perfect

hey! glad you did manage to finish the story all the wy! cos otherwise you'd have lost this fan :D anyway, it's the last chap already.. the humour lightens things up! and yeah i like the ending! your story rocks so keep on writing! ;)

Well done!

I really like how you don't QUITE have a happily-ever-after; it makes the story far more realistic than "let's kiss-all's well" would have. Very good job.

please write a sequel.

please write a sequel.

hello!
it's amazing that you've kept this fiction alive more than 2 years after you've started it, and it still flows well. as if you wrote all of those 15 chapters in a day.
well, at first the switching POVs thingy was a bit confusing, but after reading on, i don't even need to check out whose POV that chapter is on.. haha. it's great how you manage to set different tones for different characters.
take care! will be waiting for the last chapter? ;)