 anyahibiki 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Interesting...Too bad you left it there... :( |
 Kia Vail-Kagami 2004-01-08 . chapter 1Are you going to continue this someday? The begining is quite promisng, it seems. (Go, boys! Yay!^^) |
 Crystalmoon217 2003-04-10 . chapter 1Mousse's character seems just a little OOC but it was kind of humorous the way it was done. The part about "Well just on general principles..." was the part. I'm not sure if you intended it or not. Ryouga's character is also unusually subdued. But I want you to write another chapter because this is a very good start and I think I'm going to like The Plan. That was a really long review. He he he. OOps. |
 blargh 2003-03-27 . chapter 1 Well, I'm not a fan of yaoi, but this is too funny. Is Ryouga going to hook up with mousse? |