Please write more this is really good. I love it.

This is getting good.

This is a good read. I am enjoying it.

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wow! u finally updated -and i was just about to give up on you. This is getting really good, so PLEASE dont make us wait another year for an update...PLEASE

This is BRILLIANT! please finish!

THIS IS THE BEST! o poor meowth...gotta love'em. even though he wasnt in this fic much. :)

Great job! I'm not really a pokemon fan but I liked this fic. Anyway, keep it up! :)

Ooohhh! The best part yet!Good job with Jessie's emotions on finding out James had kept the secret. And the ending was so perfectly sweet!

Keep it up! I really like this series!

write more! i really like it

This keeps getting better all the time. Excellent plot twist! Ooohh, Jessie's going to be mad at James for keeping all this from her. Well, maybe not. Anyway, good job. And Merry Christmas!

Very nice part. The part with the Rapidash in the snow and the woods reminded me of Robert Frost's poem "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening". Beautiful images. And you managed to leave us hanging once again. More, soon?

Nice story! Waiting for the next chapter _

Cute

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