I know this was posted, oh, over four years ago... But I didn't find it til now. I REALLY wish I'd read this sooner, though. I loved it~ :D
It's kinda silly to think that Sol could avoid the Order for as long as the games make it seem...
Anyway, I've never really read a fic with Kliff before, let alone a young Kliff as a main character, and I must say you did a wonderful job. ^^ I like your ideas about him, and of course I loved the way you wrote Sol. Not saying more than three words at a time = so amazingly in-character. XD
Also, I enjoyed the light slashy undertones VERY much. It's mild enough that gen-lovers wouldn't really care, but present enough to make yaoi-lovers smile to themselves. ~_^
Thanks for posting this, and I hope you have at least a couple of other GG fics out there... somewhere... maybe?

Wo! Young Kliff! And yes, thank you for not having them crawl over each other as your blog promises.

I LOVE YOUR STORY, EVEN THOUGH I DON'T GET HALF OF IT. REVIEW MY STORY "SQUALL HAS NO **"!

Well, that was a bit of a refreshing read. I don't know the mooks that well myself (I'm not that much of a GG freak, I just play the games) but I did understand from Katzy's review that this was in the mook. I guess it makes sense, Kliff being saved by Sol and all, but that would mean Kliff knew Sol was a Gear. Oh well, I don't know much on that area (Kliff). But, as far as the story went, there was a good amount of description, went pretty well, except I don't know if you had this planned, but Kliff sounded like a machine. Maybe you were trying to show English wasn't his first language 'cause every sentence was so perfect in a taught way, or so I thought it was. It's a good start, but another chapter might be a bit odd unless you jump time to when Kliff handed the Seikishidan to Ky. Well, anyway, it was fairly good and could be interesting in how you develop it (if you do).

Roni would like to say that she never thought her comment would go this far. Roni does not know why she is talking in third person -- but Roni would like to point out that Kliff's entire family tree should get on Sol!

You see... Kliff passes Sol to Ky, and Ky doesn't understand! And Sol wears an apron and cleans the house and...

...yeah, see that corner? That's where Roni's going.

Damn nifty bit of writing, there. ^^ The amount of detail was lovely, and it's nice to see someone else who acknowledges that Sol saved Kliff when he was younger...yay for translate-able mooks. XD;; Keep it up!

Eh...I'm confused. Did Kliff *know* that Sol was the one who saved his life?