|Reviews for New Shores complete rewrite,english version|
| rankokun alpha 5/28/06 . chapter 4
i love the rewrite so far i hope to see more chapters in the near future!
| Happosai-sama 4/14/04 . chapter 4
Exelent! I love this story, hurry with the updates _
DEATH TO THE MOON B1TCH!1!
| Jerry Unipeg 4/14/04 . chapter 4
Very good chapter.
| Jerry Unipeg 4/14/04 . chapter 3
IT IS GREAT CHAPTER!
| Joe Fenton 2/7/04 . chapter 3
Not bad. You can tell that English isn't your first language, but it's still much better than some of the English authors here at . :)
This is a very good rewrite. Please keep up the good work.
| JPalmgren 11/21/03 . chapter 2
This new version is really getting interesting. Both the story and the language have improved a lot and there are only a few remaining minor errors...
Waiting for the next part,
| Gopu 11/20/03 . chapter 2
| Guest 11/19/03 . chapter 1
gee...make sure to ignore people who make one liners or else have your ego explode and make a crap fic that will get flamers instead.
I see that fic fanfic has some detail...maybe enough to enterain the mind of the above average reader.
I don't mean to say to put so much detail into every little crumb or something, but just a little bit more to intrest some more people.
I think some people don't know about Infinity's Shore and might go there to flame it and insult the writer that made that series. only a possitility mind you as that might not happen. it could, but who knows. make sure to add a link on the fanfic saying something about Infinity's Shore and such. it will make some people understand your fanfic a bit as well also help out stopping some other things I won't mention as you'll find out soon enough.
| Holy Sasami 11/19/03 . chapter 1
I hope you get around to writeing some new stuff for this story. Im looking forward to reading more.
| Jerry Unipeg 11/19/03 . chapter 2
GREAT chapters, need more soon (I hope).
| Teal Thanatos 7/23/03 . chapter 1
Both this and the old version of the story are with their good points. However I feel that the shortness of the current series does not do justice to the beginning made by mr Barnhill.
| Jerry Unipeg 4/16/03 . chapter 1
Very good story. I am looking forward to chapter 2.
| JPalmgren 4/16/03 . chapter 1
Great rewrite. Language, plot and text has come together into the beginning of a good story.
| Darak 4/16/03 . chapter 1
I personally think you should have waited until you had more chapters to post this, like it is now I can't decide if I hate it or like it.
| Jerry 3/26/03 . chapter 1
I am looking forward to the next chapter (I hope soon)