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Pretend2besome1
2007-06-03 . chapter 14
Awesome Sophitia/Taki fic you had made!
I have to say I really love their conversation about their preferences of how they would like their girlfriends to behave and I love the teasing!!
Although the ending was sweet I was kinda hoping there would be more than that.
Hope you’ll make another Sophitia/Taki fic and I really enjoyed this fic ^_^
SeaGreen
2007-01-19 . chapter 1
I've loved this fic since forever, I just reread it tonight, and it was just as wonderful as I'd remebered it.
Kunsi the Demonfire Initiate
2005-08-06 . chapter 14
Too many errors. Spelling errors. It's not like yo misspelled alot of things, it's just that you put too many spellings of the same word in the wrong places.

You put "there" in some of the correct places, but you also put it when "their" and "they're" should be too.

I love the story, I just hate the errors. It dectracts from the reading, especially when you're writing a fan-fiction this long.
[Oh, and you put "your" in some places where "you're" belongs.]
El Loco
2004-11-30 . chapter 1
WOW!
This is not really a review since I haven't finished reading your story... I will eventually give me some time it's not that small (so far I think it's great if it makes you feel better)
But ah...that picture thingy in yer profile scared the crap out a me. How on earth did you do that!?
Yeah...I mean the scare the crap out of me in a good way really...
Oh oh! Before I forget thanks for the review I was wondering if anyone would read that ever again
hanyou007
2004-09-03 . chapter 14
hey great job! you finally finished! shweet! great job and good ending! and teh sex scene was good too! you have more guts then me... anyway great job and once again thanks for checkin out my story. hope you like it im workin on a new chappie right now. anyway good job and i will look for your new story soon
Ashishu
2004-09-03 . chapter 14
The best ending ever! You should be proud ^_^
That's a whole lotta writing for three days! :O

I can't believe that you mentioned me! :D

I would describe myself as flattered for writing that about me, but the word 'flattered' is a serious understatement. :)

I can't wait to see the sequel to this :) Good luck always for whatever you may do, although i'm sure you don't need it ^_^
Witch-Hunter 51
2004-08-31 . chapter 13
This was a very good fight chapter Hope I get to see more soon.
Alcandre
2004-08-25 . chapter 13
Wow! *stares at screen in awe* Wow...wow...very much...wow! I love this so much! This is just wonderful! I am still in awe so I don't really know what to say to express my feelings properly. I just love this so very much and I will probably read it again. Wonderful job!
Ashishu
2004-08-25 . chapter 13
My laptop still doesn't work damnit, i had to use someone elses computer. But that's okay.

Anyway, great chapter! With all that action it must've been annoying to plan it all out.

The soul charge idea wasn't cheezy at all, it was even better when you made Taki's appearence different from Sophitia's. I can assure you not a whole lot of fanfic writers would've even thought of that.

Can't wait for your next chapter! ^_^
SeaGreen
2004-08-16 . chapter 12
I love you that's all there is to say. I utter love you, and you re so going on my favs list.
LionHeart823
2004-07-28 . chapter 12
Meh, who fuggin' cares what it reads, I'm just glad ya updated. Yo, can't wait til the next chapter!
Devil Jin22
2004-07-24 . chapter 1
Hey good job! your story was great! can I ask for a lemon. Well good job I hope I can wright as well as you can!
adun
2004-07-09 . chapter 11
Not bad, but seriously, you have to check your grammar. Sometimes it´s obnoxious.
LionHeart823
2004-07-08 . chapter 11
O.O...{!}
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!
This story is so frickin' awesome!!
A few errors here and there but holy hell!
This is so great! T.T
Ashishu
2004-06-22 . chapter 10
Hurry up with chapter 11 man! the suspence is killing me! But everything's going to be alright right? It better be, i don't want a bad ending where the bad guy wins and both girls die. I want them to win, save the day, go back wherever togther, the whole shpeel! Please don't give it a bad ending! The near death of Sophitia was enough for a lifetime. And since she surrendered, have the ending where the bad guy's thoughts is thrown right in her face and witnesses her death, her assassens death, the demon's death, the whole thing! Make it a good ending.
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