hehe, i just read your review for my story and i decided to check out one a' your's. And i like what i'm reading. And should have my story updated soon, I've been on hiatus! *-*

Hey, don't beat yourself up over the crappy reviwes and stuff. I get that all the time. Maybe you could read my Yugioh story called Fate. Yes, I know it's crappy, but I like the story. Check it out, and good job!

-Matsuko

Aw! Poor beast! *Beast being something my friends and I call each other* Tov! *Tov being the way we comfort each other* ...And I don't know any other quirky things to say at the moment as it is too early in the morning... Unless you want to hear about cotten candy, coleslaw, or celery... -_-;; Sorry, late night.

So Malik didn't live in ancient Egypt... Sucks to be you, huh? And he doesn't really have a yami from thousands of years ago. Actually its just something created by all the pent-up rage he had but that's beside the point... The point IS, this is fanfiction, girl! Do whatever the hell you please! It doesn't matter if it's true to fact (that doesn't stop me from writing about Seto and Ishuzu) and it doesn't matter if its a little off the beast-beaten path... There are already stories out there about Malik's non-existant past in Egypt... They've got Seto paired with a past version of Serenity for Rah's sake! God, child, do what you want! If fanfiction isn't for fun and guilty amusement, its not worth living! Plus I couldn't stand to see you throw this fic away of change it. I'd cry. So, please continue. This story is so cool and I'd hate to see any of it changed or altered to fit the strange thoughts of the creator of this show. Kick **, cuz!

Ciao

Um, sweetheart, we knew but really didn't care. See the thing about it is it's *your* fanfic. Do whatever you want with it!! There are no rules; that's why it's called a *fan* *fic*. Fiction written by a fan. Let your imagination go! It's a pretty story; don't change it! Just write it out, and poot anyone who doesn't like the fact that it doesn't follow the timeline. You're the author, so what you say goes, right!?
Hope you take my advise, and update soon.

~The Lady Sephiroth~

If I put the word ducky in my review do I get a cookie too?
Malik is so adorable...he's delicious...(insert malicious grin here)
Your story wasn't confusing at all. I understood it perfectly. You've got a knack for detail, and I like the fact that your character is so imaginative. And Orpheus is a cutie...(insert evil giggle here)
So, I've met another mythology lover...*sigh*
Update soon; I'm keeping tabs on this.

~The Lady Sephiroth~

omigosh!i love the story! i also am an egypt freak!

I still think you're better then I am.

Yami: *sigh* You're fishing for complements.

Am not! Its true! You have such a broad vocabulary and a way with words. Its really good. Please continue! I like the idea a lot, so please don't give up on it. I tend to give up on things when they start getting good

Seto: IE Kiss from the Angel of Death

I haven't given up on that!

Yami: Oh, come on! You haven't added to it in about three years.

LIARS! *sob* You're so mean to me! *sob* I'm gonna get a new muse! What's Yami Bakura's phone number?

Bakura: *grin*

Yami and Seto: NO! *throw arms around her*

Seto: We'll be good!

Yami: Honest!

Heh... If you say so... *glomps them* Please update soon!

Kiyoshi:: O.O oh the detail... *drools* i wanna write like that...

Snow:: you write just fine without it being all one paragraph!

Kiyoshi:: ... *glares* YOU RUINED IT!

Snow:: ...what?

Kiyoshi:: *stomps foot* my MOMENT! you ruined my special admiring MOMENT!

Snow:: o_O''

Kiyoshi:: *eyes go all watery* I was gone al day denied the internet and YuGiOh stories now I come back and find this wonderfully written detail filled story that isn't yaoi and I'm enjoying and i try to make the review all special like and YOU had to come and RUIN it!

Snow:: ...uh...I'm sorry??

Kiyoshi:: *sniffs* you better be!

Snow:: *scoffs and walks away*

Kiyoshi:: ...I need an insane pyromaniac to talk to... *somehow gets a hold of yami malik* ^-^ HOTTY BISHI!

Marik (Y Malik):: ^_^ I'm loved by the people!

Kiyoshi:: while I'm here huggling the hot bishi you can write more about his Hikari and I can watch Bakura attempt to mutilate him for almost breaking his promise...

Marik:: what?! If he lays one finger on my hikari I'll-

Kiyoshi:: ^-^ *has effectively stuck duct-tape of Marik's mouth* we'll leave them to settle their own problems deary...

Marik:: *glares dangerously down at Kiyoshi* ...

Kiyoshi:: ^_^ always hotter when angry yes sirri!! I'm sure...uh... very long name here... so ... HoST-dono will keep the peace somehow!

Marik:: *glares at Bakura threateningly*

Kiyoshi:: ... do you happen to LIKE being duct-taped? you haven't taken it off yet...

Marik:: ...

Kiyoshi:: ^-^ or are you afraid to?

Marik:: *has wittnessed the awesome destructive power of duct-tape ripping before* ...

Kiyoshi:: ^_^ that whole incident with Die really sticks into people's brains...oh well! *rips off the duct-tape*

Marik:: arrghow! *clutches face*

Kiyoshi:: I'm so mean... ^-^ but he don't mind! So...you get along with that story!! I REALLY WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS! I bet it's durring the Battle City thingy...or right after... RIGHT?! *hears echo* ... where'd everybody go? *blinks at the emptyness* o_O
...Marik left... DAMN YOU STUPID INSANE PYRO! ...he likes fire...I like watching him play with fire... *grins* he caught my hair fire once and he has a nice scar on his shoulder to remember me by... *wonders why she's telling you all of this*

You can tell I'm obsessed...

Update?

The kiwis like, and so do i. me likey lots. well, anyla, you should write more, but you're doing this a t school, so i shall be lenient in my request. WTF did i just say? oh well. good work!

That was really good!! I love very descriptive writing. :) And I really want to know is going to happen!

God, you are SO good at this! How can you SAY you don't have the will to carry on writing?!?! I'd give my left arm for your talent! *and, trust me, I like my left arm*
Would you take it from me if I could have your talent? Please?

Yami: Stop begging for talent.

Oh... But I wanna!

Seto: Cut it out

Stupid ** bishis! *slow burns* Fine! I'll just continue to praise you! Hope ya don't mind!^^

This is so cool, even if it is just the beginning. I hate you for your ability to write but love you because I realize that there are still some really good writers on ff.net (I know a few of them, but mostly there's people like me who really suck). God, I'm jealous. I love your stories! Write more.

Seto: You're probably creeping her out

Yami: Yeah, after all, it's only the prologue.

SILENCE! She deserves to know that she's good!! So shut up! The two of you have been on me all day...

Seto and Yami: ...*knows that sounded wrong, but don't say anything*

Please write more. Thanks! ::) Your smiley face, on loan to me. Can I borrow it for this review?

Sounds interesting. I'll check back.