 Victoria Wolf 3/10/09 . chapter 1That was pretty great |
 Diney 1/16/08 . chapter 1 Hi, I'm so pleased that you decided to write this tag. It's extremely well written and meaningful. I love the ending Jack allowing Daniel his emotion and just 'Thank you' meaning so much, with Sam and Teal'c in the background but close.
Of course Daniel would be sick and would feel sick as the realisation hits him. You also had their voices down perfectly. Thank you for a great read
Diney |
 numom1 9/19/07 . chapter 1Wow! That was a great tag. I truly felt Daniel's pain and my only wish was that it went on longer. Thanks for sharing! |
 BizzyLizzy 4/4/04 . chapter 1That was really good, a great insight into Daniel's reaction following his kidnapping. |
 Alhena 9/4/01 . chapter 1Loved it! Too bad this wasn't part of the original episode. |
 Becky 7/6/01 . chapter 1 Wonderful story, and I loved poor Daniel's emotions...and the "Thank you" and all it's meanings were so true! You did a great job with him, (and Jack as well!) :) |
 Lyn 3/18/01 . chapter 1 You've done this before - I can tell. Very powerful look at The First Ones. You've written an epilogue I would have liked to have seen. Great job. Thanks for sharing. |
 Anna 12/4/00 . chapter 1 Very good fic! A bit out of character for Daniel at the end, but very well written! Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us! :) |
 sally 12/2/00 . chapter 1 Oh poor Daniel. He really never deserves the crap he gets, does he? A good story, to show these people care about each other. : ) |
 Neil 12/2/00 . chapter 1 It was a pretty interesting story... kind of pointless, but who cares? Thouroughly enoyable. |