 Victoria Wolf 2009-03-10 . chapter 1That was pretty great |
 Diney 2008-01-16 . chapter 1 Hi, I'm so pleased that you decided to write this tag. It's extremely well written and meaningful. I love the ending Jack allowing Daniel his emotion and just 'Thank you' meaning so much, with Sam and Teal'c in the background but close.
Of course Daniel would be sick and would feel sick as the realisation hits him. You also had their voices down perfectly. Thank you for a great read
Diney |
 numom1 2007-09-19 . chapter 1Wow! That was a great tag. I truly felt Daniel's pain and my only wish was that it went on longer. Thanks for sharing! |
 BizzyLizzy 2004-04-04 . chapter 1That was really good, a great insight into Daniel's reaction following his kidnapping. |
 Alhena 2001-09-04 . chapter 1Loved it! Too bad this wasn't part of the original episode. |
 Becky 2001-07-06 . chapter 1 Wonderful story, and I loved poor Daniel's emotions...and the "Thank you" and all it's meanings were so true! You did a great job with him, (and Jack as well!) :) |
 Lyn 2001-03-18 . chapter 1 You've done this before -- I can tell. Very powerful look at The First Ones. You've written an epilogue I would have liked to have seen. Great job. Thanks for sharing. |
 Anna 2000-12-04 . chapter 1 Very good fic! A bit out of character for Daniel at the end, but very well written! Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us! :) |
 sally 2000-12-02 . chapter 1 Oh poor Daniel. He really never deserves the crap he gets, does he? A good story, to show these people care about each other. : ) |
 Neil 2000-12-02 . chapter 1 It was a pretty interesting story... kind of pointless, but who cares? Thouroughly enoyable. |