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| LiME sODA rOCkS tHiS yoO 2006-08-29 ch 13,  | abuseWhat were Lucky's last words I want to know that was crazy story loved it keep going this is for you. |
| Smartest Girl In The World 2006-08-15 ch 13, | abuseEloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani? means: My God, My God, why have you forsaken me? Anyways, I love your poems. I write poems too. Are you a Christian? I am. If you are just tell me or something. |
| Jemmasgiirl 2006-07-16 ch 2, | abusehey =)that was really good. Some people on this site is harsh. You should check out my stories :) you might like them. Anyways, keep up the good stories :) |
| CCAASSSSAANNDDRRAA 2005-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYOU NEED TO SPACE IT OUT MORE |
| Big Friendly Walrus 2005-03-05 ch 3, | abuseMary Sues seem to be attracted to Craig like maggots on a corpse. I'm glad you killed her off though at the end...the world needs less Mary Sues. Although Pills are so cheesy. She should cover herself in honey and jump in a room full of bees...or bears...or both..or have Hannibal Lecter cook her. I'm not picky. |
| PrincessPunky 2003-11-18 ch 13, | abuseI didn't like Lucky at all but after she killed herself well I kinda feel sorry for her. I was also shocked when I found out she was Manny's cousin, I didn't see that coming. lol. :D |
| Strawberry Sociopath 2003-11-01 ch 12, | abusePeople really shouldn't try to put twists in stories when previous chapters don't fit with them (see: Lucky's diary) Not everyone can be a writer. Don't worry about it. You're just one of the masses of poor writing skills and bad ideas. |
| Strawberry Sociopath 2003-11-01 ch 11, | abusePicture me rolling my eyes. |
| Strawberry Sociopath 2003-11-01 ch 9, | abusebad bad bad i wish this chapter didn't exist. this is not quality. |
| Strawberry Sociopath 2003-11-01 ch 7, | abusenot shocking, no |
| Strawberry Sociopath 2003-11-01 ch 5, | abuseI don't see what the big deal is over her anger. Her anger is a big pile of nothing. It was barely even there. |
| Strawberry Sociopath 2003-11-01 ch 3, | abuseMary Sue. |
| degrassicutie1 2003-10-21 ch 13, | abuseThis is intense! Lucky killed herself? I like your use of poetry! Manny didn't even know her that long! This was such a good story and you should win a million dollars for it! |
| degrassicutie1 2003-10-21 ch 12, | abuseWhoah! Lucky was a druggie? She is pregnant? This story has just gotten more intense! Keep writing, you have major talent! |
| degrassicutie1 2003-10-20 ch 11, | abuseWhoah! Manny and Lucky are related! So cool! |