So...freaking...evil... I LOVE IT! Couldn't have happened to a better porker.

That was absolutly horrible! I loved it!(Does that make me a bad person? Oh well.) Brava! That was the best laugh I've had in a while.

And as for some of the people commenting that only Genma and Soun would have known about the Ryoga's curse, that might be true. However that isn't why Kasumi and Nabiki left the table. They just happened to realize they were about to eat Akane's pet pig. Just my 2 cents.

ZOMG~
xD
Ryoga for dinner
wow~
xD

my eyes went wide when i read this...gosh...i almost had the same reaction as kasumi's (except for the gagging part) but this is so amusing that i had to laugh when i finished reading it. and akane had no clue on what's going on...hahaha! great story...hehehe^^ a touch of dark with a sugar coating...hehehe^^ nice...

There's a loophole tho... Wouldn't Ryoga just change back when put in the stew? That would make Ranma a cannibal...

Hahaha! I CAN'T believe he did that! And he doesn't even feel soory for it! :) This was resally funny, and I'm not surprised that Akane didn't get it. This was recomended to me by someone, and they were right- it's good. Great job here. I think it's the best oneshot I've read in a,long while. :)
sincerely, nihongoneko

You are a sick twisted sadistic...

It's still written with decent reactions by everyone other than Ranma and the oblivious Akane.

I hate it but at least it's only because of the subject matter.

Daniel Thomas Stack
Aka Spokavriel

Wow... that's actually kinda creepy.

Well written but this story is still creepy.

...reading this fic makes me realize I'm not as human as I thought I am...

I laughed...

And when I realized it was actually P-chan

I still laughed...

...

either you;re a good writing or I'm a mild cannibal...

Eck

You edited this last month, after posting it in 2003? That sukiyaki was cold wasn't it? Grim and delightful, but I don't think our good-hearted hero would go there. Compare to MZephyr's "Anything Goes."

As for editing: Read it again and take out all the unnecessary "that"s. And try to change passive sentence structure to active. Eg.:

>He had told them that he was celebrating a recent victory and felt he had to share his good fortune with his surrogate family.<

Would be better as: The specially prepared meal was the pig-tailed boy's way of celebrating the good fortune of a recent victory with his surrogate family.

See what I mean?

Write something everyday.

-JW

^_^ Ha ha... funny. Poor Ryouga.

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Hahaha thats funny, just as funny as Ranma being gang raped in his curse form by a bunch of druken guys... And than I guess theyd have to cook her alive and eat her... But thats funny right?

((laughs)) Gyaah, it's easy to assume that Ranma ate Ryouga (Blech) but being the ultimate Ryouga fangirl that I am, I'm going to go into a state of denial. Ranma was just joking! (And he probably *wanted* to make Nabiki sick. Can't exactly blame him. The powers of suggestion are indeed substantial on a human as Nabiki herself points out when Ryouga fights Ranma for the first time in the series. It's worked on your hapless readers as well).

Still, good for a giggle or two. Not bad writing style, and no grammar/spelling mistakes as far as I could see.

Take care, and Keep writing!