That was amazing!

Ashley

_ I like this fic! Much better than when she was falling off the cliff type thingy when Van first showed his wings to save her. Maybe...you could write a sequel?

oh i loved it.it was sooo good.you see i dont see a lot of v/h fics but of cors i just started looking but i think this is the best yet!

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that was well written!

wow! that was so good! Wait...make that GREAT! they make such a good couple:) hehehe:) in my opinion anyway:) keep up the good work!

It was so beautiful I almost cried please continue on your good and talented bye!

It was great! Very well done. From what I've seen, you have only done the main part. You must add more to it. You've only told us the plot. Don't stop here! Keep going! It's going fine. I love it!How'a bout Hitomi get's taken away by an evil vilan and it's up to Van to save her, but...

That was awfully short and fast...

Uh, maybe you should check spelling? Nice anyways.

WAY too much i love you's in one fic, but it's hmmm..okay, pretty much.

*Sigh* Too bad that didn't happen in the series. Sort of sudden but great anyways.

This was cliche, but very well written. Can't wait to see more of your stuff!