  cindy 2004-01-19 . chapter 6 needs more sisterly moments.Its still good! HAs a lot of action. |
| Emily 2003-09-21 . chapter 6 Pretty good! Well there was a lot of posessing but it was good overall |
  emilyannexx 2003-07-24 . chapter 4I really like it. You can't leave me hanging there. It's to good to stop ther. PLEASE Please continue.
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| emilyannexx 2003-07-24 . chapter 2 Sorry I didn't review the first chapter, i just went onto the second chapter. Really good story. really really good. well continue. bye |
| Maggie Doyle 2003-05-13 . chapter 4 Great. sorry didn't review. well, keep up the GREAT work!11 |
 ChArMeD-101 2003-04-02 . chapter 3Okay, let me try and give you good critics on your writing. I liked it and everything, but you kind of plot the conflict a little late. So, i'm not even sure what the conflict is. Umm...I thought your dialoges were just great! You did good for a newbie. Good job! Keep writing! |
| 2lazy2signn(wannabpiper) 2003-04-01 . chapter 3 add more soon it is werid, thats good |
| Ingrid 2003-03-31 . chapter 2 Ypu have to continue but you have to include more drama not just killing |
| Maggie Doyle 2003-03-29 . chapter 1 Great. add more soon |
| Paigefan 2003-03-28 . chapter 1 please continue |
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