Never thought I could almost feel bad for Grima, but you made me change my mind... nicely done.

Very nice!
I liked this beautiful piece, very romantic and poetic. I like the way you've written it, in short pieces. It feels a bit like watching these characters through a broken mirror, considering the fact that we don't really know much about Gríma.
I really liked it.

This is like the poem that is in the book Violet and Clair. It is strange, haunting and beautyful. m... Maby thats what Grima thinks of Eowyn...

this is beautiful...::sniff:: You have truly captured the essence of the characters. Please keep it up!

Sweet and sad and by far to short - Grima was one of my favourite characters because of his voice and because I always like the baddies. I think this is a beautiful portrait of both his and Eowyns dilemmas, very poignant, without a single word which would be too much or misplaced. (Mithril award is well deserved, congratulations!) Please please write a sequel. A long sequel. Pretty please.