Oh this is marvelous! I've only just started but I'm going to continue with the rest of the story this weekend. :D

That was amazing. *squees in fangirlish delight* You tied everything together so nicely...

I actually read this story once before, but I stopped at chapter ten because of homework. But now I have re-read the whole thing and I am a happy girl!

Great Fanfic!

It took a while to read, but it was worth it.

I think the ending could have been better though, I don't think Ramirez would be a homosexual...
Illchymis, maybe, but not Ramirez...

Regardless, a great fic!

Wow. Just...wow. The story was really, really excellent. Your use of Ramirez' POV really showed his emotions well. And the idea...is really neat. I had NEVER thought of that before. Great redemption fic. Loved it! *hands a cookie*

Great fic. Whew, I read it all in one sitting. I have a few issues with the slash, but, meh, I'm a sucker for redemption stories.

You did a really great job fleshing out Ramirez' character. The switches from third-person to first person view were a really good plot device. But I'm sure you've heard all this before. So I'll just say I really enjoyed the read.

Good story. I like how you explained most of the reasons behind Ramirez's madness, as opposed to saying,"He did it, but he didn't really mean to." However, one thing I couldn't figure out was how Ilchymis came into possession of Ramirez's crystal. The description of the man who "rescued" his crystal fit the description of either Lord Zivilyn Bane or a typical Zivilyn Bane. Also, if Vyse is "The Legend", then how could either Banes still be alive? And furthermore, even if Vyse didn't kill them in this story, Lord Bane was still on the Wanted List at a point in time. So why would Ilchymis purchase anything from one? Don't say it was anyone other than one of the Banes, because only Hortekans wear masks, and they don't wrap themselves up like mummies. Regardless, with my massive ranting and nit-picking aside, this is so far one of my favorite fics.

Great great work, I especially like your explanation of Ramirez's past I think it fits very well much better then the one provided in legends. the only thing I found off was that the last part was a bit awkward to me with Ilchymis and Ramirez, to me they just seemed like good freinds and Ilchymis was being very kind to him. However this is just my opinion and in any case I look forward to more of your work! :)

To bad everything must come to an end, this was a great fic. The inly thing that bothers me is Ramirez is gay or something like I would never have though of something like that. Of course you sure make it look deep more like a romance story to me. To bad Ramirez didn't cast Silver Eclipse in the last battle.

Nice ending.

*sighs*...this is such a good story...I just wish that you weren't making it slash...If you insist on it being a romance...perhaps Ramirez and Fina?...I haven't seen one of those yet...

Wow pretty cool chapter not the kind of battle I spected. It's so sad it is now almost over, and by the way I think you are a very good author because you take then time to answer and comment perdonaly on most reviewers reviews.

Can't wait to see the end!

Nice...

No, this is the last change. It's looking good.

Dang... I'm not the only one to have spotted the Galcian/Elcian link :) I was just trying to work out a plot I could wrap around that one as well... ah well :) you're probably doing a better job of it than I would, anyway. I like the Seventh Moon twist, tho :)