 Tathar 3/30/03 . chapter 3Amazing, amazing, amazing. Beautiful prose... I can't even imagine writing the entire "Sir Gawain and the Green Knight" like this, though! O_o
I especially liked these parts:
"He hewed away at groping hand and dark song,
Then sang away for help from Tom Bombadil!"
One of Frodo's finest moments, I think, and one of the things in FotR I did miss from the movie. (But then again, they would have had to try and explain Tom Bombadil...)
And this was really good, very descriptive of the hobbits:
"The Hobbits slept till sunup,
For their hearts were stout."
Bravo! Can't wait for more! |
 fymhrisfawr 3/29/03 . chapter 1I've read Sir Gawain and the Green Knight in the Middle English original a couple of years ago - a great story. I am not familiar with Tolkien's translation into Modern English, though (at least I don't remember it much).
It's really weird to read chapter summaries of LOTR in a form like this, it IS unique. It's a shame you didn't try to make it alliterative verse, but that is very, very difficult and would have cost you lots of more nerves, I suspect.
I'll be on the lookout for more stanza/chaper thingies. |